List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
No, usually I don't make a list. I just go ahead and just browse around and buy whatever I think is necessary.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Sometimes I make a list and when I do it works quite well. Uh, but in many cases I don't make a list and then I find myself, uh, being distracted doing, uh, all sorts of other tasks. So I do believe that, uh, creating a list of tasks will make things a lot.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
That's a very good question. Umm, I don't think there's a particular reason. It's just a pure neglect and umm, people are lazy I guess. Uh, I'm speaking for myself right now. Uh, very often it's just a neglect and umm, I do believe that making a list would make things.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on paper. I find that when I write things down, I also find it easier to remember. And umm, sometimes I do write them on the phone as well. But uh, I believe in uh, paper is more productive in my opinion.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like 'just' and try to provide a clearer reason or example to enrich your response. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.
예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to browse and pick up items as I remember them, which sometimes leads to buying only what I think is necessary.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 60.0제안: Your answer has good content but is affected by hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and finish your sentences properly.
예시: Sometimes I make a list for my work, and when I do, it helps me stay focused. However, if I don't make a list, I often get distracted by other tasks. Therefore, I believe that creating a list makes managing work much easier.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains many hesitations. Try to avoid filler words and repetition. Provide a clearer and more specific reason why some people dislike making lists, and complete your sentences fully.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious or time-consuming. In my case, I sometimes neglect it due to laziness, even though I know making lists can help organise tasks better.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural by reducing filler words and improving sentence structure. Try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating phrases like 'I find'.
예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Although I sometimes use my phone, I believe paper lists are more effective for me.
문법
× I believe in uh, paper is more productive in my opinion.
✓ I believe that paper is more productive in my opinion.
The phrase 'I believe in uh, paper is more productive' is incorrect because 'believe in' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a clause. The correct structure is 'I believe that...' followed by a clause. Therefore, 'I believe that paper is more productive' is the correct form.
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