List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误且表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更简洁流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind to remember what to buy clearly and efficiently. However, I rarely write it down on paper because I find it more complicated that way.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和句子未完成，表达不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a work list before starting my tasks. It helps me stay organized because I write it down on paper, so I can clearly see what I need to do and check off tasks as I complete them.

제안: 回答中有词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议加强词汇准确性，避免模糊表达，并用更具体的理由支持观点。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes their time. They prefer to work spontaneously and believe this helps them be more efficient.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，且部分句子不连贯。建议注意句子结构和时态，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: It depends on the day. Usually, I prefer to write my to-do list on paper because it helps me see my tasks clearly. However, if I think of new tasks during the day, I add them to a list on my phone immediately.

× Yes, I really make a shopping list in my mind to tell me which to buy clearly and efficiently.

✓ Yes, I really make a shopping list in my mind to tell me clearly and efficiently which to buy.

句子中“to tell me which to buy clearly and efficiently”中，副词“clearly”和“efficiently”修饰动词短语，应放在“tell me”之后，且“which to buy”应紧跟其后，调整顺序使句子更通顺。

× But I'm not very used to write the list down on paper because I think it will make things more complex.

✓ But I'm not very used to writing the list down on paper because I think it will make things more complex.

“used to”后面应接动名词形式，故“write”应改为“writing”。

× So at least in your mind is a good choice.

✓ So at least in your mind it is a good choice.

句子缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整，应补充主语。

× Yes, I do make a working list before I have to work.

✓ Yes, I do make a working list before I work.

“before”后面一般用一般现在时表示将来，故“have to work”改为“work”更合适。

× It is very useful for me and and I have to write that working list down on paper and it shows me clearly the tasks that I have to do and whenever I finished one I.

✓ It is very useful for me, and I have to write that working list down on paper. It shows me clearly the tasks that I have to do, and whenever I finish one, I mark it off.

原句过长且结构混乱，缺少句子结尾，需拆分成多个句子并补充完整，使表达清晰。

× I think that's OK. Do not make a list.

✓ I think that's OK. Not making a list is fine.

“Do not make a list”作为独立句不自然，改为名词短语表达更符合语境。

× Umm, different people have different customers.

✓ Umm, different people have different customs.

“customers”意为“顾客”，应为“customs”（习惯）更符合语境。

× Maybe they just think making lists are kinds of wasting of their time and they just want to do things more efficiently.

✓ Maybe they just think making lists is a kind of waste of their time, and they just want to do things more efficiently.

“making lists”作为主语是单数，谓语动词应用“is”；“kinds of wasting”表达不当，应改为“a kind of waste”。

× I think it depends on the start of the day.

✓ I think it depends on the start of the day.

此句无明显错误，保持不变。

× I would like to make A to do list and write it down on paper so it will show me clearly about my tasks.

✓ I would like to make a to-do list and write it down on paper so it will show me clearly my tasks.

“to do list”应加连字符变为“to-do list”；“show me clearly about my tasks”中“about”多余，应去掉。

× However, when I come up with some new tasks, I would like to make a list on my immediately.

✓ However, when I come up with some new tasks, I would like to make a list on my phone immediately.

句子缺少名词“phone”，导致表达不完整，应补充完整。