List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'helps me to remember what I want and make it simple' which can be combined. Also, use articles correctly ('the supermarket'). Try to use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but the sentence could be more fluent. Use linking words like 'although' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating 'make a list' too often by using synonyms or pronouns.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused, although sometimes I forget to do it. Overall, lists definitely improve my productivity.

제안: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use 'making lists' instead of 'making this', and 'flexible' instead of 'flexibility'. Also, the example is unclear and could be more specific. Try to use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be more spontaneous and flexible. For example, they enjoy making decisions on the spot, such as choosing what to do during a flight.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Use 'prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone' and 'it's easier to see my tasks'. Also, explain your points with linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because it's easier to see my tasks and I can quickly jot down any ideas. Also, using my phone can be distracting due to notifications.

× Yes, I always make a shopping list when I'm going to supermarket because it helps me to remember what I want and make it simple without wasting my time.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I'm going to the supermarket because it helps me to remember what I want and makes it simple without wasting my time.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'supermarket' because it refers to a specific place known to both the speaker and listener. Also, 'make it simple' should be 'makes it simple' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. However, the latter is a subject-verb agreement issue and is addressed separately.

× Yes, I always make a shopping list when I'm going to supermarket because it helps me to remember what I want and make it simple without wasting my time.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I'm going to the supermarket because it helps me to remember what I want and makes it simple without wasting my time.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Subject-verb agreement requires the verb to match the subject in number.

× Some people don't like making this because they prefer to be more spontaneous and flexibility.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be more spontaneous and flexible.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer clearly to the activity mentioned. Also, 'flexibility' is a noun but the sentence requires an adjective 'flexible' to describe 'they'.

× For example, they enjoy making decision on the spot inside of the plane.

✓ For example, they enjoy making decisions on the spot inside the plane.

The phrase 'making decision' should be plural 'making decisions' because it refers to general actions. The preposition 'inside of' is unnecessarily wordy; 'inside' alone is correct. Also, 'the plane' is correct as it refers to a specific plane.

× I prefer make a list on paper rather on my phone because easy to see my task and I can write anything in my mind.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because it is easy to see my tasks and I can write anything on my mind.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to make' (infinitive form). The phrase 'rather on my phone' should be 'rather than on my phone' to correctly express preference. 'Easy to see my task' lacks a subject; 'it is easy' is correct. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match general meaning. 'Write anything in my mind' should be 'write anything on my mind' or better 'write down anything on my mind'.

× Also I can distract on my phone when I have a notification.

✓ Also, I can get distracted by my phone when I have a notification.

The verb 'distract' is transitive and requires an object; the correct phrase is 'get distracted by'. 'On my phone' is incorrect here; 'by my phone' indicates the source of distraction.