List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I do make a list when I go to the shop to remember them, not to forget them. Uh, I always forget if I don't make a list about all the products, all the in things my mom asked me to, uh, bring.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
No, I don't make a list for my work, but I do make some notes in my phone so that as a rema, as a reminder, I write them down on my notes app so that I don't forget about the Washington forget about the work.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think it's a hassle for them, uh, because writing down a note, uh, in their, in a paper or, uh, in their phone that needs time B. But some people don't need to do that. So they don't make list lists and.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
It depends. When I go to a shop or grocery shop or a supermarket, uh, my mom makes the list on paper, uh, so that I can see and buy all the things. But when I go outside and my mom calls me for something, I write that down on my phone.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'to remember them, not to forget them'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items if I don't. For example, my mom often asks me to buy specific things, so the list helps me remember everything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 60.0제안: Focus on clarity and avoid repetition. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, correct pronunciation and avoid filler words will improve your score.
예시: I don't make formal lists for work, but I use my phone's notes app to remind me of important tasks. This method helps me stay organized and not forget my responsibilities.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: Try to speak more clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Structure your answer with a clear reason and explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming to write notes on paper or phone. Additionally, they may feel confident remembering tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing filler words and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: It depends on the situation. For grocery shopping, my mom usually makes a paper list so I can easily see what to buy. However, when I'm outside and my mom asks me to get something, I note it on my phone.
문법
× I always forget if I don't make a list about all the products, all the in things my mom asked me to, uh, bring.
✓ I always forget if I don't make a list of all the products, all the things my mom asked me to bring.
The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the contents of a list is 'of'. Also, 'in things' is incorrect; it should be 'things'. So, use 'a list of all the products' to express the intended meaning clearly.
× I do make some notes in my phone so that as a rema, as a reminder, I write them down on my notes app so that I don't forget about the Washington forget about the work.
✓ I do make some notes on my phone as a reminder; I write them down on my notes app so that I don't forget about the work.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone for notes; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, the phrase 'about the Washington forget about the work' is unclear and likely a speech error; it should be simplified to 'about the work' for clarity.
× So they don't make list lists and.
✓ So they don't make lists.
The phrase 'list lists and' is incorrect and redundant. The correct plural form is 'lists'. The extra words should be removed for grammatical correctness and clarity.
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