List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤り（"making"は"make"に修正、"show"は"shop"に修正）があり、繰り返しや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法を正し、簡潔に答えましょう。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it helps me avoid wasting money and buying unnecessary items.

제안: 文法の誤り（"it is almost always working"は"it almost always works"に修正）、繰り返し（"I like I like"）があり、表現が不自然です。より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it almost always helps me stay organized because I like to follow a plan.

제안: 文法の誤り（"that is likes wasting time"は不自然）、論理のつながりが弱いです。理由を明確にし、論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult to follow them, which can feel like a waste of time.

제안: 文法的にはほぼ正しいですが、"using phone"は"using a phone"に修正し、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to write things down, and using a phone can be distracting for me.

× Yes I do making a list before going to the show.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before going shopping.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'going to the show' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'going shopping' to match the meaning.

× Shopping is important because if we don't make a list we we use we waste money or buy something we don't need.

✓ Shopping is important because if we don't make a list, we waste money or buy things we don't need.

The sentence has repeated words ('we we use') and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'something' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Adding a comma after the conditional clause improves clarity.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it is almost always working.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it almost always works.

The phrase 'it is almost always working' is incorrect; the correct present tense form is 'it almost always works' to indicate habitual action.

× I like I like work follow the plan, so making a list is best.

✓ I like to work following the plan, so making a list is best.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect verb form. 'I like to work following the plan' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Because if we make a list, sometimes we can't follow the list that is likes wasting time.

✓ Because if we make a list, sometimes we can't follow it, which feels like wasting time.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used; 'which' is appropriate for non-restrictive clauses. Also, 'likes' should be 'feels like' to express the feeling properly.

× I prefer making a list on paper because using phone is difficult for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because using a phone is difficult for me.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to make' is more appropriate. Also, 'phone' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.