List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như 'unnecessary thing' nên là 'unnecessary things'. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember and control what I need to buy. As a result, I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary items and save time during my shopping trips.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh và lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm rõ ý, tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. This way, I can avoid distractions and concentrate better on my tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'scared value' và 'not discipline'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

예시: There are several reasons why some people don't like making lists. For example, they might feel it's a waste of time, lack discipline, or simply don't have enough time to prepare a list.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ nối và giải thích rõ ràng lý do bạn thích làm danh sách trên giấy hoặc điện thoại.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to remember things that way. Also, writing on paper allows me to add detailed notes and be more creative with my ideas.

× Therefore I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary thing and save time for me.

✓ Therefore I can avoid wasting money on unnecessary things and save time for me.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple unnecessary items. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work that's 30 make a list which help me control and display myself.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, that's 30 items, which help me control and display myself.

The phrase '30 make a list' is unclear and likely means '30 items on the list'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'list' (see next correction).

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work that's 30 make a list which help me control and display myself.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work that's 30 items, which helps me control and display myself.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'list' (singular), so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help' to agree in number.

× Therefore I can avoid. I can avoid distraction and save some or concentrate concentrate better for my lessons.

✓ Therefore, I can avoid distraction and concentrate better on my lessons.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Save some or concentrate concentrate better' is unclear and redundant. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× There are lots of reasons for this, but I think some people don't like making this because they scared value or they are not discipline and they or they are not have the time to do this.

✓ There are lots of reasons for this, but I think some people don't like making lists because they are scared of failure, or they are not disciplined, or they do not have the time to do this.

Pronouns and verbs are incorrectly used. 'They scared value' is incorrect; it should be 'they are scared of failure' or similar. 'Not discipline' should be 'not disciplined'. 'They are not have' should be 'they do not have'. Also, 'making this' should be 'making lists' for clarity.

× I can refer to make a list on paper because I think I can remember longer than when I write on paper and additionally I think I have enough time to write detail list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think I can remember longer than when I write on my phone, and additionally, I think I have enough time to write a detailed list.

'Refer to make a list' is incorrect; 'prefer to make a list' is correct. Also, 'detail list' should be 'detailed list'. The comparison is between paper and phone, so 'when I write on paper' is changed to 'when I write on my phone' for logical consistency.

× Moreover, I can more I can free to create what new ideas?

✓ Moreover, I am freer to create new ideas.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I can more I can free' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'am freer' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.