List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to browse and find new or interesting items spontaneously.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，句子过长且不连贯。建议使用简单句表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me study more effectively because I can focus better and feel relaxed when I listen to music.

제안: 回答内容重复且不完整，逻辑不清晰。建议明确表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并给出具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel controlled and stressed. They may also become anxious if they can't complete everything on the list.

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子重复使用“also”，表达不够简洁。建议使用多样的连接词，简化句子结构。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check it anytime. It helps me stay organized and comfortable.

× I think people shopping is because they would like to buy something that's new and also more attractive for people to buy with it.

✓ I think people shop because they would like to buy something that's new and also more attractive for people to buy.

这里的 'people shopping' 用法错误，应该用动词原形 'shop' 来表达一般现在时的动作。'shopping' 是现在分词，不能直接用作主语的谓语动词。

× I think I'm not going to have a list when I'm shopping because I think people shopping is because they would like to buy something that's new and also more attractive for people to buy with it.

✓ I think I won't have a list when I'm shopping because I think people shop to buy something new and more attractive.

这里 'I'm not going to have' 用法不够简洁，表达将来否定时用 'won't' 更自然。

× I think people that don't like to make a list because they don't want people to control with them and also they think they might have stressful in it and because people are getting more anxious and also battling with it because they think.

✓ I think people who don't like to make lists because they don't want others to control them, and they think it might be stressful, making them more anxious and struggling with it.

'people that' 应改为 'people who'，'make a list' 应改为复数 'make lists'，'stressful' 是形容词，不能直接用作名词，需改为 'be stressful'。此外，'control with them' 应改为 'control them'。

× I think people that don't like to make a list because they don't want people to control with them and also they think they might have stressful in it and because people are getting more anxious and also battling with it because they think.

✓ I think people who don't like to make lists because they don't want others to control them, and they think it might be stressful, making them more anxious and struggling with it.

'control with them' 是错误的介词搭配，正确用法是 'control them'，即直接宾语。

× I think people that don't like to make a list because they don't want people to control with them and also they think they might have stressful in it and because people are getting more anxious and also battling with it because they think.

✓ I think people who don't like to make lists because they don't want others to control them, and they think it might be stressful, making them more anxious and struggling with it.

这里 'people that' 应改为 'people who'，'people to control with them' 中的 'people' 指代不清，应改为 'others'，使句子更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient for me and also suitable for me to look forward with it in any time and also it is a perfect way for me to be more comfortable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient for me and also suitable for me to look at it anytime, and it is a perfect way for me to be more comfortable.

'look forward with it' 用法错误，正确表达应为 'look at it'，'in any time' 应改为 'anytime'。