List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "all of the goods that what I have to buy" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use simpler, clearer expressions.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I find it difficult to remember everything I need. Therefore, to avoid forgetting anything, I prepare the list before I go to the store.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me a lot. Since I tend to forget many tasks, making a list ensures I complete everything on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid repeating words and use linking phrases to make your answer coherent.

예시: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. However, for me, it is difficult to remember everything without a list.

제안: Your answer does not directly address the question and is confusing. Try to answer the question clearly by stating your preference and giving reasons. Use proper sentence structure and avoid irrelevant details.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily add or remove items. It also helps me avoid forgetting things when I shop.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go to shop because it is quite hard for me to remember all of the goods that what I have to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it is quite hard for me to remember all the goods that I have to buy.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, 'that what I have to buy' is redundant; 'that I have to buy' is sufficient. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So rather than forgetting any goods that I have to buy, I would make a list before going so.

✓ So rather than forgetting any goods that I have to buy, I make a list before going.

The phrase 'before going so' is incorrect and unnecessary. The modal 'would' is not appropriate here as the action is habitual. Removing 'so' and changing 'would' to 'make' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, of course it works because I have all heard of remembering like things.

✓ Yes, of course it works because I have a poor memory for remembering things.

The phrase 'I have all heard of remembering like things' is unclear and incorrect. It seems the student meant to express difficulty in remembering things. Rephrasing to 'I have a poor memory for remembering things' clarifies the meaning.

× So I have I have to make a list before going to work.

✓ So I have to make a list before going to work.

The repetition 'I have I have' is a mistake. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence structure.

× In my in my point of view maybe they are good at remembering our list of things so.

✓ In my point of view, maybe they are good at remembering their list of things.

The phrase 'our list' is incorrect when referring to other people. It should be 'their list'. Also, 'in my in my' is repeated and should be corrected to 'in my'. Adding a comma after 'point of view' improves readability.

× But talking about me is really hard for me to remembering the guilt list days so.

✓ But talking about me, it is really hard for me to remember the full list of things these days.

'To remembering' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to remember'. 'Guilt list days' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'full list of things these days' fits the context better. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× Once I was like 3-3 years ago, my girlfriend used to send me in a supermarket to buy lots of things, but many times I forget regularly so she often used to write me a list rather.

✓ About 3 years ago, my girlfriend used to send me to the supermarket to buy lots of things, but many times I forgot, so she often used to write me a list instead.

'Send me in a supermarket' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to the supermarket'. 'Forget regularly' is awkward; 'forgot' is better for past tense. 'Rather' is incorrect here; 'instead' is appropriate. Also, 'Once I was like 3-3 years ago' is awkward; 'About 3 years ago' is clearer.