List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。より自然で効果的な英語にするために、文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

예시: I don't usually make a list when I shop, but I should because I often forget what to buy.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果について具体的に説明する必要があります。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks and stay organized.

제안: 回答がほとんど意味を成しておらず、質問に答えていません。質問の意図を理解し、理由を簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

제안: 回答が不完全で繰り返しが多く、文法的にも不自然です。好みを明確に述べ、その理由を具体的に説明することが求められます。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check my list anytime.

× I I usually focus something I I'll finally forget something important, so I I.

✓ I usually focus on something, but I finally forget something important.

The original sentence has repeated words and lacks proper sentence structure, making it unclear. The phrase 'focus something' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on something'. Also, the sentence needs conjunctions to connect ideas properly.

× A1 of the reason of people don't make the rest is it is. Is Minneapolis.

✓ One of the reasons people don't make lists is that it is inconvenient.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'A1' and 'Is Minneapolis'. It lacks proper sentence structure and meaning. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct explanation.

× I I prefer to make a list on my because I I bring it everywhere and so whenever I want I can I can.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I bring it everywhere, so whenever I want, I can check it.

The original sentence has repeated words and missing nouns ('my' what?). It also lacks clarity and proper punctuation. The correction adds the missing noun 'phone' and improves sentence flow and clarity.