List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, which is good. However, to improve, try to avoid redundancy and make your response more natural by using smoother phrasing and adding a bit more detail. For example, instead of saying "going for shopping," say "going shopping." Also, you could briefly explain why making a list helps you, using linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time when I'm at the store.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by avoiding filler words like "Uh" and by providing a clearer explanation. Also, try to use more natural expressions instead of "wastage of time," such as "a waste of time." Adding a linking word to connect your ideas will make your answer more coherent.

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I find it wastes time and doesn't help me stay organized.

제안: Your answer repeats the previous idea but lacks variety and specific details. To improve, try to explain more reasons why some people might dislike making lists, and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating phrases exactly and use more natural expressions.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, and others feel it limits their flexibility throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating the same idea twice. Also, try to use linking words to connect your reasons smoothly and add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, which makes it easy to check and update my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I am going for shopping because it's easy for me to remember the things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it's easy for me to remember the things.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. This is a common collocation in English where 'go' is followed directly by the activity in its -ing form without 'for'.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on the phone because I carry the mobile phone with me at all time on regular basis.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on the phone because I carry the mobile phone with me at all times on a regular basis.

The phrase 'at all time' should be 'at all times' to indicate 'always'. Also, 'on regular basis' should be 'on a regular basis' because 'basis' requires an article here.