List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by making the sentences more natural and concise. Avoid starting sentences with 'Firstly' and 'Secondly' in casual speech; instead, use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list on my phone because it's convenient and helps me remember all the important items, which saves me time while shopping.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unnatural expressions and grammatical errors. Avoid phrases like 'slow bird' which are unclear. Also, try to connect your ideas more smoothly and correct sentence fragments.

예시: No, making a list doesn't work for me because I prefer to work at my own pace, and having a list makes me feel more stressed.

제안: Your answer is personal and relevant, but it can be improved by using clearer vocabulary and smoother linking. Avoid repeating words like 'more' unnecessarily and correct minor errors such as 'the the'. Also, explain your ideas more clearly.

예시: For example, when I use a list, I feel burdened and stressed because I keep thinking about all the tasks I have to finish, which makes it hard to focus on the current one.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and awkward phrases like 'make less on paper'. Use clearer expressions and link your ideas smoothly.

예시: I'm quite clumsy, so I prefer making lists on my phone because it's safer and I won't lose it like I might with paper.

× I personally feel that making list saves my time.

✓ I personally feel that making a list saves my time.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in this context.

× I'm a slow bird and like to do my work at my own pace and if I have a list of work to do then I find it more. Stressed.

✓ I'm a slow person and like to do my work at my own pace, and if I have a list of work to do, then I find it more stressful.

The phrase 'slow bird' is incorrect; 'slow person' is appropriate. Also, 'more stressed' should be 'more stressful' to correctly describe the feeling caused by the list. Additionally, punctuation and sentence structure were improved for clarity.

× I cannot even focus on the the task I am currently doing.

✓ I cannot even focus on the task I am currently doing.

The definite article 'the' was repeated twice consecutively, which is a typographical error. Only one 'the' is needed before 'task'.

× if I make less on paper I am 100% sure that I will lose it.

✓ if I make a list on paper I am 100% sure that I will lose it.

The phrase 'make less on paper' is incorrect. The intended meaning is to 'make a list on paper'. 'Less' is a quantifier used with uncountable nouns and does not fit here.