List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a more complete and natural answer by explaining who 'we' refers to and why you make a list. Also, avoid short answers and add some details to make your response more effective.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list with my family to make sure we don't forget anything important.

제안: This answer is unclear and does not address the question. Please respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unrelated or confusing statements.

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time.

제안: Provide a more detailed and natural explanation. Use linking words to connect your ideas and give specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring, and they prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural by stating your preference directly and explaining why you prefer that method. Use complete sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them whenever I need to.

× Because they not like it.

✓ Because they do not like it.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for the negative present tense. In English, when negating verbs in the present simple tense for plural subjects, 'do not' is used before the base verb. So, 'they not like' should be corrected to 'they do not like' to maintain proper subject-verb agreement and correct negation.

× Are you not going work? I am baby.

✓ Are you not going to work? I am a baby.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' after 'going' to indicate the destination or purpose, which is 'work'. Also, 'I am baby' lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'baby' because 'baby' is a singular countable noun. The correct form is 'I am a baby.' This correction ensures proper prepositional use and article usage with pronouns.

× I I'll do it in my phone.

✓ I'll do it on my phone.

The phrase 'in my phone' is incorrect because the preposition 'on' is used with devices like phones to indicate where something is done or stored. Also, the sentence redundantly uses 'I' and 'I'll' together; 'I'll' (I will) alone is sufficient. The corrected sentence is 'I'll do it on my phone.' This fixes the modal verb usage and preposition choice.