List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit lengthy and has some grammatical errors. Try to keep your sentences concise and use correct tense. Also, use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize important items. This way, I save time and stay organized.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. Use present simple or present perfect for habitual actions and improve sentence structure. Also, add linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I often make a checklist for my work. I prepare it the day before, so it helps me stay organized and saves time.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, use 'because' and 'or' to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous, or they have a good memory and don't need to prepare a checklist.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with your preference and support it with reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it's more convenient than using paper.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go for a shopping.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the preposition 'for' or the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'go shopping'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× It really saved me a lot of time and helped me in organizing the things.

✓ It really saves me a lot of time and helps me in organizing things.

The student is describing a habitual action, so the present tense should be used instead of past tense. Using 'saved' and 'helped' implies a one-time event, but the context suggests ongoing benefit. Also, 'the things' is unnecessarily definite; 'things' is sufficient.

× I order them in from important things to unimportant things so that I can give first priority to the important things

✓ I order them from important things to unimportant things so that I can give first priority to the important things

The phrase 'order them in from' is incorrect. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'order them from important things to unimportant things'. This is a preposition usage error.

× I used to prepare a checklist before the day I need to do the things.

✓ I prepare a checklist before the day I need to do the things.

The phrase 'used to prepare' suggests a past habit that no longer happens, but the context implies the student still does this. Therefore, present tense 'prepare' is appropriate. Also, 'the things' is vague; better to say 'my tasks' or 'the tasks'.

× It really worked good for me and saved a lot of time in organizing the things.

✓ It really worked well for me and saved a lot of time in organizing things.

The adverb 'well' should be used instead of the adjective 'good' to modify the verb 'worked'. Also, 'the things' is unnecessarily definite; 'things' is sufficient.

× In other case they may have very good memory power so that they don't need any checklist to prepare the day before.

✓ In other cases, they may have very good memory power, so they don't need any checklist to prepare the day before.

The phrase 'In other case' should be plural 'In other cases' and needs a comma after it. Also, 'so that' is better replaced with 'so' to indicate result. This is an error in conjunction and phrase usage.

× I think it's based on their availability, whether it's paper or phone smartphones, we carry them over everywhere and it's easy to make a list on phone comparatively to making a list on paper.

✓ I think it depends on availability, whether it's paper or smartphones; we carry them everywhere, and it's easier to make a list on the phone compared to making a list on paper.

The sentence has pronoun inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'It's based on their availability' is unclear; 'it depends on availability' is better. 'Phone smartphones' is redundant; 'smartphones' suffices. 'Carry them over everywhere' should be 'carry them everywhere'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone'. Comparative form 'easier' is correct instead of 'easy' with 'comparatively to' which should be 'compared to'. This addresses pronoun and comparative usage errors.