List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Absolutely. I think that people should make a list when go shopping. For me, before I go to the supermarket, I always make a list that so that when I go to the market I don't buy the things that I don't need.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Well absolutely 'cause I am a high school student so I have to make a list for my work. Umm seeing I'm go to the 12th with I make a schedule for my studies, so I think that it work effectively.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Well, in my own perspective, I think that people don't like making this because if they have to, if they making this, they have to obey what the what happened in the list. So when they have something troubles, they can't follow the list. I think that it can be the.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I'm in my mind, I prefer make a list on my phone because when I make a list on the paper, I have to borrow the paper whenever I go. But when I make a list on my phone, I just open the phone and see what's going to happen one or two minutes after.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không rõ ràng như "umm" và câu bị lặp lại. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.
예시: Yes, I make a study schedule because I am a 12th-grade student. It helps me manage my time effectively and improve my learning.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ.
예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them. If unexpected problems arise, they find it hard to follow the list strictly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác như "I'm in my mind" hay "borrow the paper". Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can easily check my list anytime without carrying extra paper.
문법
× I think that people should make a list when go shopping.
✓ I think that people should make a list when going shopping.
After 'when', a verb in the -ing form (gerund) is required to indicate the action happening at that time. 'Go' should be changed to 'going' to be grammatically correct.
× I think that it work effectively.
✓ I think that it works effectively.
The modal verb 'think' is followed by a clause that requires subject-verb agreement in the present tense. 'Work' should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.
× if they making this, they have to obey what the what happened in the list.
✓ if they are making this, they have to obey what happened in the list.
The verb 'making' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'what happened' is the correct past tense form here.
× I'm in my mind, I prefer make a list on my phone because when I make a list on the paper, I have to borrow the paper whenever I go.
✓ In my mind, I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I make a list on paper, I have to borrow paper whenever I go.
The phrase 'I'm in my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'In my mind'. Also, 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. The article 'the' before 'paper' is unnecessary when speaking generally.
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