List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ như "Have you at least helped me" không đúng ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my iPhone because I tend to forget what I need when shopping. It helps me keep track of my purchases and saves a lot of time. For example, last week I managed to buy everything I needed without missing anything because I followed my list.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý đến việc sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng, ví dụ "A to do list" nên viết thường và "This mattress goes very efficiently" là câu không đúng nghĩa. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list on both my iPhone and my laptop because I tend to forget important tasks easily. This method works very efficiently as it helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't miss any deadlines. For example, I can quickly check my phone when I am away from my desk, which helps me manage my work better.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi sai như "making leads" thay vì "making lists", "too rejected" không đúng nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive and prefer more spontaneous ways of organizing their tasks. For example, they enjoy having the freedom to decide what to do at the moment instead of following a fixed plan. Additionally, making lists can sometimes feel overwhelming or stressful, especially when there are many things to include.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "But sometime I am use my paper" nên là "But sometimes I use paper". Hãy luyện tập cách nói tự nhiên và chính xác hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc và hiệu quả.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access whenever I want. For example, I can quickly add items while shopping or when I remember something important. Also, it helps me set reminders so I never forget what I need to do. However, sometimes I use paper lists as well.

× Have you at least helped me keep track of my purchase and save a lot of time?

✓ It has at least helped me keep track of my purchases and save a lot of time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Have you' which is a question form and does not fit the context. The correct form is 'It has' to indicate that the list helps in keeping track. Also, 'purchase' should be plural 'purchases' to match the context of multiple items.

× I usually make A to do list on both my iPhone and my laptop because I tend to forget important text easily.

✓ I usually make a to-do list on both my iPhone and my laptop because I tend to forget important tasks easily.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'text' is incorrect in this context; 'tasks' is the appropriate word.

× This mattress goes very efficiently because it helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't miss any deadline.

✓ This method works very efficiently because it helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't miss any deadlines.

'This mattress goes very efficiently' is incorrect; it should be 'This method works very efficiently'. Also, 'deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match the context.

× For example, I can quickly check my phone when I am away from my desk, which makes me.

✓ For example, I can quickly check my phone when I am away from my desk, which helps me stay organized.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'which helps me stay organized' completes the thought logically.

× Some people don't like making leads because they find them too rejected and prefer more spontaneous ways of organising their texts.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive and prefer more spontaneous ways of organising their tasks.

'Leads' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. 'Rejected' is incorrect in this context; 'restrictive' fits better. 'Texts' should be 'tasks' to match the context.

× For example, they enjoy having a freedom to decide what to do at the moment instead of following a fixed plan.

✓ For example, they enjoy having the freedom to decide what to do at the moment instead of following a fixed plan.

The article 'a' before 'freedom' is incorrect; 'freedom' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'the'.

× Additionally, making lists can sometimes feel overwhelming or stressful, especially when there are many things to include.

✓ Additionally, making lists can sometimes feel overwhelming or stressful, especially when there are many things to include.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× Also it helps me set reminders so I never forget what I need to do.

✓ Also, it helps me set reminders so I never forget what I need to do.

A comma is needed after 'Also' to separate the introductory word from the main clause.

× But sometime I am use my paper.

✓ But sometimes I use my paper list.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I am use' is incorrect; it should be 'I use'. Adding 'list' clarifies the meaning.