List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如时态错误（"shopped"应为"shop"），以及句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致，避免多余连词，句子应简洁流畅。

예시: Definitely, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything. Moreover, I believe it saves money by preventing me from buying extra items.

제안: 回答中句子未完整，表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和连贯的逻辑。建议补充完整句子，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并提供具体例子。

예시: Absolutely, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. For example, I can allocate my time efficiently and avoid missing deadlines.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意句子完整性，使用正确的语法结构，并具体说明原因。

예시: Well, some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to act spontaneously and follow their own pace.

제안: 回答较为自然，但部分表达略显重复，且“do anything”不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并具体说明手机提醒的内容。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can check my list anytime, and my phone reminds me of important tasks.

× Definitely, I always make a list when I shopped because it can makes me more clearly that I will not forget anything.

✓ Definitely, I always make a list when I shop because it can make me more clear that I will not forget anything.

句子中“when I shopped”时态不一致，前面用的是一般现在时“always make”，应保持时态一致，改为“when I shop”。另外，“can makes”中“makes”应为原形“make”，因为情态动词后接动词原形。

× Definitely, I always make a list when I shopped because it can makes me more clearly that I will not forget anything.

✓ Definitely, I always make a list when I shop because it can make me more clear that I will not forget anything.

“can”是情态动词，后面动词应为原形，不能用第三人称单数形式“makes”，应改为“make”。

× Definitely, I always make a list when I shopped because it can makes me more clearly that I will not forget anything.

✓ Definitely, I always make a list when I shop because it can make me more clear that I will not forget anything.

“more clearly”是副词形式，但此处应使用形容词“clear”来修饰“make me”，表示“使我更清楚”。

× Moreover, and I believe that it can save my money because I will not buy any extra items.

✓ Moreover, I believe that it can save my money because I will not buy any extra items.

“Moreover”和“and”不能连用，二者都是连接词，使用其中一个即可，避免重复。

× Absolutely, I have to make a list for my work since it can help me ensure that I will not forget anything important and I will allocate my time regularly because I definitely have a lot of.

✓ Absolutely, I have to make a list for my work since it can help me ensure that I will not forget anything important and I will allocate my time regularly because I definitely have a lot to do.

句子末尾缺少宾语，短语“have a lot of”后应接名词或不定式，此处应补充“to do”表示“有很多事情要做”。

× Well, I think some people don't like making this because they think make a list will definitely restrict their freedom and they just like do something, follow themselves and.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they think making a list will definitely restrict their freedom and they just like to do things following their own wishes.

“making this”不明确，应改为复数“making lists”。“think make a list”缺少动名词形式，应为“think making a list”。“like do something”应为“like to do things”。“follow themselves and”结构不完整，改为“following their own wishes”更通顺。

× Well, I tend to make a list on my phone because I always carry my smart phone so that I can check my list every time and my smartphone will remind me to do anything.

✓ Well, I tend to make a list on my phone because I always carry my smartphone so that I can check my list anytime and my smartphone will remind me to do everything.

“every time”用法不当，应改为“anytime”表示“随时”。“do anything”在此语境下不合适，应改为“do everything”表示“完成所有事项”。