List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making sentences more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'I can make a list because it can remind me easily the things' which is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar such as 'I forget to make it list' should be 'I forgot to make a list'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries or important household items. This helps me remember everything I need. For instance, once I forgot to make a list and ended up missing many items. Therefore, making a list is very helpful for me to shop efficiently.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and better linking words. For example, instead of 'before one night', say 'the night before'. Also, avoid repetition and improve grammar, such as 'works very good' should be 'works very well'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list to organise my daily work schedule, and it works very well for me. For example, sometimes I forget what to pack in my son's lunch box or school bag. So, the night before, I prepare a list which helps me pack everything easily the next morning.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correcting grammar. For example, 'in my point of view' should be 'in my opinion', and 'make least prior' is unclear. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it wastes time and they trust their memory. However, in my opinion, even a good memory can fail sometimes, leading to problems. Therefore, I think making lists is a better way to stay organised.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer and more natural sentences. For example, 'depends whatever in my hand' can be 'it depends on what I have with me'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly. Correct grammar such as 'I reach the Mart' should be 'I reached the mart'.

예시: It depends on what I have with me, but usually I prefer to make lists on my phone since I always carry it. This is convenient because I don't have to worry about forgetting the list. For example, once I made a list on paper but forgot it at home when I went to the mart, which was very troublesome.

× Yes, definitely I'll make a list whenever I go for grocery or for buying something important for a house.

✓ Yes, definitely I'll make a list whenever I go grocery shopping or buy something important for the house.

The phrase 'go for grocery' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go grocery shopping'. Also, 'for buying' should be 'buy' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× I can make a list because it can remind me easily the things.

✓ I can make a list because it can easily remind me of the things.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' before the object. Also, the adverb 'easily' should be placed before the verb 'remind' for correct adverb placement.

× For example, recently I went to the grocery store and I forgot many things because I forget to make it list.

✓ For example, recently I went to the grocery store and I forgot many things because I forgot to make the list.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame. Also, 'it list' is incorrect; it should be 'the list'.

× So this is very helpful for me to easily find everything.

✓ So this is very helpful for me to easily find everything.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Yes, definitely I will make a list for remembering my work of the day schedule.

✓ Yes, definitely I will make a list to remember my work schedule for the day.

The phrase 'for remembering' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to remember' to express purpose. Also, 'work of the day schedule' should be 'work schedule for the day' for clarity.

× So it works very good for me.

✓ So it works very well for me.

'Good' is an adjective and should not be used to modify the verb 'works'. The correct adverb form is 'well'.

× Even sometimes for example, I forget what I have to give my son in lunch box or in school bag.

✓ Sometimes, for example, I forget what I have to give my son in his lunch box or school bag.

The phrase 'Even sometimes for example' is awkward; 'Sometimes, for example,' is better. Also, possessive pronouns 'his' should be used before 'lunch box' and 'school bag'.

× So before one night I can make a list for tomorrow morning, this can easily pack his lunch and his whole bag.

✓ So the night before, I can make a list for tomorrow morning; this helps me easily pack his lunch and his whole bag.

'Before one night' is incorrect; 'the night before' is the correct expression. Also, 'this can easily pack' is incorrect; 'this helps me easily pack' clarifies the subject and action.

× Well, it's their opinion.

✓ Well, that's their opinion.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is less appropriate here; 'that's' (that is) better introduces an opinion.

× Some people think that making a list is just a waste of time and they have a good memory.

✓ Some people think that making a list is just a waste of time and that they have a good memory.

Adding 'that' before 'they have a good memory' improves sentence clarity and parallelism.

× But in my point of view, sometimes your good memory can betray you and whenever the time comes you forget and that makes you in trouble.

✓ But in my point of view, sometimes your good memory can betray you, and when the time comes, you forget, which gets you into trouble.

'Whenever the time comes' is better as 'when the time comes'. Also, 'makes you in trouble' should be 'gets you into trouble' for correct idiomatic expression.

× So for me it's good to make least prior.

✓ So for me, it's good to prioritize making a list.

'Make least prior' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'prioritize making a list' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, it depends whatever in my hand.

✓ Yes, it depends on whatever I have in my hand.

'Depends' requires the preposition 'on'. Also, 'whatever in my hand' is incomplete; it should be 'whatever I have in my hand'.

× Most of the time I have phone in my hand.

✓ Most of the time I have a phone in my hand.

The singular countable noun 'phone' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× So I make notes in one phone which is good for me because phone will always carry with us whenever we go to Mart.

✓ So I make notes on my phone, which is good for me because I always carry my phone with me whenever I go to the market.

'Make notes in one phone' is incorrect; 'make notes on my phone' is correct. Also, 'phone will always carry with us' is incorrect; the person carries the phone. 'Mart' should be 'market'.

× For example once I made list on paper and I reach the Mart and I forget the list at home.

✓ For example, once I made a list on paper, and when I reached the market, I forgot the list at home.

The verbs 'reach' and 'forget' should be in past tense 'reached' and 'forgot' to match the past time frame. Also, 'made list' needs the article 'a list'.

× That is very very troubling for me so.

✓ That was very, very troubling for me.

'Is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'so' at the end is unnecessary and can be omitted.