List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达，并且增加细节说明，比如为什么要列购物清单。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: 回答不清晰且语法错误严重，建议明确回答问题并解释清单的作用。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it helps me stay organized and complete my duties efficiently.

제안: 回答表达不自然且缺乏细节，建议用完整句子说明原因，并举例说明。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

제안: 回答过于简短，建议补充理由并用完整句子表达。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× Yes, I go to shop, make a list.

✓ Yes, I go shopping and make a list.

原句中缺少连词，且动词短语使用不当。'go to shop' 应改为 'go shopping'，表示去购物的动作；两个动作之间需要用连词 'and' 连接。

× Yes, I make a list for my work it official.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work; it is official.

原句中缺少连接词或标点符号，导致句子结构混乱。应在两个独立分句之间加分号或句号，并补充主语和动词，使句子完整。

× Because some people think make lists not easy.

✓ Because some people think making lists is not easy.

原句中动词 'make' 应改为动名词 'making'，且缺少系动词 'is'，使句子完整。

× I prefer my phone.

✓ I prefer using my phone.

原句缺少动词或动名词，表达不完整。'prefer' 后面应接动名词或名词短语，故改为 'prefer using my phone'。