List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason why making a list is helpful.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go to the shopping mall for groceries because it helps me remember what to buy. Otherwise, I often forget important items and have to go back again.

제안: Your answer is good but try to use plural forms correctly and add linking words to improve coherence. For example, use 'helps' instead of 'help' and 'tasks' instead of 'task'.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because I am a web developer and have many tasks to complete. Therefore, making a list helps me organize and prioritize my work, so I can be more productive throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors and filler words. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and explain your points with examples.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember tasks mentally or do things spontaneously. For instance, they may find lists unnecessary for simple daily activities like shopping.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'it says paper'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about the app you use.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry everywhere. For example, I use the 'Mode' app, which helps me organize my tasks quickly and check them anytime. Also, I never lose my list this way when I go out.

× Uh, making list is a good thing because uh, when I, uh, go to the groceries, I forgot, uh, what to buy.

✓ Making a list is a good thing because when I go to the grocery store, I forget what to buy.

The phrase 'making list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' and should be 'making a list'. Also, 'groceries' should be 'grocery store' to refer to the place. The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget'. The sentence is corrected to use proper article and verb forms.

× And sometimes uh, umm, I came out uh, home without buying some necessary things.

✓ And sometimes, I come home without buying some necessary things.

The verb 'came' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'come' is appropriate. Also, 'came out home' is incorrect; 'come home' is the correct phrase.

× Making a list help me organize and prioritize my work so I can be more productive from morning to night.

✓ Making a list helps me organize and prioritize my work so I can be more productive from morning to night.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Making a list'.

× It's really helpful to manage my time better and avoid forgetting important task.

✓ It's really helpful to manage my time better and avoid forgetting important tasks.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items to avoid forgetting.

× Some people don't like making leads because, uh, they have different ways of organizing their tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have different ways of organizing their tasks.

The word 'leads' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'lists' as per the context of making lists.

× And they might finest, uh, unnecessary and respective when their everyday life, especially when it's come up simple tasks or shopping or.

✓ And they might find it unnecessary and repetitive in their everyday life, especially when it comes to simple tasks or shopping.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Finest' should be 'find it', 'respective' should be 'repetitive', and 'when it's come up' should be 'when it comes to'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to carry everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to carry everywhere.

The noun 'list' requires the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I usually use the mode app which helps me organize my task quickly and check them anytime.

✓ I usually use the Mode app which helps me organize my tasks quickly and check them anytime.

The app name 'Mode' should be capitalized as a proper noun. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'them'.

× Also, uh, it says paper and I never lose my list this way whenever I go out.

✓ Also, it saves paper and I never lose my list this way whenever I go out.

The phrase 'it says paper' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'it saves paper'. The pronoun 'it' refers to the app, which saves paper by being digital.