List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để ý tưởng được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my team at work because it helps me organize tasks more effectively. For example, it allows me to prioritize what needs to be done and ensures I complete everything on time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp các lý do cụ thể, rõ ràng hơn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they are not used to organizing their tasks this way. Also, some may find it unnecessary or time-consuming, especially if they prefer to remember things mentally.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to use. For example, I can quickly add or delete items, and I always have my phone with me, so it helps me stay organized better than using paper.

× Just ideally I easily make a list before I go shopping, it helps me to stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important item, for example when I shop for grocery, having at least save me time and prevent me from being unnecessary thing.

✓ Just ideally I easily make a list before I go shopping, it helps me to stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important item. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list at least saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'having at least save me time' is incorrect because after 'having' a gerund or noun should follow, and the verb should be in third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'having a list'. Also, 'prevent me from being unnecessary thing' is incorrect; it should be 'prevents me from buying unnecessary things' to correctly use the verb and plural noun form.

× Just ideally I easily make a list before I go shopping, it helps me to stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important item, for example when I shop for grocery, having at least save me time and prevent me from being unnecessary thing.

✓ Just ideally I easily make a list before I go shopping, it helps me to stay organized and I'm sure I don't forget any important item. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list at least saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The word 'grocery' should be pluralized to 'groceries' when referring to shopping for food items in general. Also, 'unnecessary thing' should be plural 'unnecessary things' because it refers to multiple items.

× For your work, I usually make a list for my group because it's have me organize my tests more effectively more.

✓ For work, I usually make a list for my group because it helps me organize my tasks more effectively.

The phrase 'it's have me' is incorrect; 'it' is singular and should be followed by 'helps' (third person singular verb). Also, 'tests' should be 'tasks' to fit the context, and the extra 'more' is redundant and removed.

× For your work, I usually make a list for my group because it's have me organize my tests more effectively more.

✓ For work, I usually make a list for my group because it helps me organize my tasks more effectively.

The verb 'organize' is correctly used in base form after 'helps me'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'have' instead of 'helps'.

× For example, it allow me to priority what's need to be done and ensure that I complete everything on time.

✓ For example, it allows me to prioritize what needs to be done and ensures that I complete everything on time.

The verbs 'allow' and 'ensure' should be in third person singular form 'allows' and 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'priority' should be the verb 'prioritize', and 'what's need' should be 'what needs'.

× For example, it allow me to priority what's need to be done and ensure that I complete everything on time.

✓ For example, it allows me to prioritize what needs to be done and ensures that I complete everything on time.

The phrase 'what's need' is incorrect; it should be 'what needs' because 'what' is singular and requires the singular verb 'needs'.

× I think some people don't like making this because they don't have the habit of organising their tasks this way or so some might consider it unnecessary or time consuming, especially if they prefer to remember things mentally.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have the habit of organizing their tasks this way, or some might consider it unnecessary or time-consuming, especially if they prefer to remember things mentally.

The word 'this' is incorrect when referring to 'making lists'; it should be plural 'lists'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer to make this on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to use for a sample.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to use, for example.

The word 'this' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'for a sample' is incorrect and should be 'for example'.

× I can quickly add or delete item and I always have my friend with me so I won't focus my lease.

✓ I can quickly add or delete items and I always have my phone with me so I won't lose my list.

The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple entries. Also, 'friend' is incorrect in context; it should be 'phone'. 'Focus my lease' is incorrect and should be 'lose my list'.

× I can quickly add or delete item and I always have my friend with me so I won't focus my lease.

✓ I can quickly add or delete items and I always have my phone with me so I won't lose my list.

The phrase 'focus my lease' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'lose my list'. Also, 'friend' is incorrect; it should be 'phone' as the device used for making lists.

× This me to help me stay organized and set paper.

✓ This helps me to stay organized and avoid using paper.

The phrase 'This me to help me' is incorrect; it should be 'This helps me'. Also, 'set paper' is unclear and likely intended as 'avoid using paper' or 'use less paper'.