List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and complete answer directly addressing the question. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example to support your answer.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember what I need to buy.

제안: Make sure your answer is coherent and complete. Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Sometimes I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete, and it helps me remember everything I need to do.

제안: Focus on clear grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they are confident in their memory, so they don't feel it's necessary.

제안: Avoid contradictory or confusing statements. Make sure your answer is clear and logical. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's easier to check the list anytime.

× No, I don't because I have a good memory and I don't need to see the rest. What to buy?

✓ No, I don't because I have a good memory and I don't need to see the list of what to buy.

The original sentence 'What to buy?' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'the list of' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Sometimes, yes, because I have a lot of things to do and sometimes I forgot to.

✓ Sometimes, yes, because I have a lot of things to do and sometimes I forget.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the context requires present tense to match 'have' and the ongoing situation. Using 'forget' maintains tense consistency.

× What? I forgot to do what I need to.

✓ I forgot to do what I needed to.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. Changing 'need' to past tense 'needed' aligns with 'forgot' and clarifies the meaning. Also, removing 'What?' improves fluency.

× I think because it is because it takes time to make it and some people have confident of having a good memories.

✓ I think it is because it takes time to make a list and some people are confident in having a good memory.

'Have confident' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'are confident'. Also, 'a good memories' is incorrect; 'memory' should be singular without 'a' or plural without 'a'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× That's why I think sometimes people doesn't don't like.

✓ That's why I think sometimes people don't like it.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, 'doesn't don't' is a double negative and incorrect. Adding 'it' clarifies the object.

× Umm, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I everywhere I always bring my phone and it is easier to see the list than on my phone.

✓ Umm, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always bring my phone everywhere and it is easier to see the list on my phone.

The phrase 'I everywhere I always bring my phone' is incorrect. The correct order is 'I always bring my phone everywhere'. Also, 'than on my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone' to complete the comparison properly.