List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct tense and clearer expressions, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.'

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, clarify your meaning and use proper tense and sentence structure. For example, say 'Yes, when I have many tasks, I make a list to organize my schedule, which helps me manage my time effectively.'

예시: Yes, when I have many tasks, I make a list to organize my schedule, which helps me manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer is brief and has grammatical errors. To improve, provide a clearer reason with correct grammar and expand your answer slightly. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time, but I personally find it helpful.'

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time, but I personally find it helpful.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. To improve, express your preference clearly with correct grammar and logical flow. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and portable than paper.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and portable than paper.

× Yes, I often make a list of things because it helped me to remind what things I have to buy and from that it have to enhance my time.

✓ Yes, I often make a list of things because it helps me to remember what things I have to buy and from that it helps me save time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'helped' and 'have' instead of the present tense 'helps' and 'has' to describe habitual actions. Also, 'remind' should be 'remember' to correctly express recalling information. The verb tense should be consistent with the present habitual action.

× Yes, if I have to do a menu work then I used to make a list of my work because it helped to improve my timetables and from that I can do easily work in everything and I can manage my time from that.

✓ Yes, if I have to do a lot of work, then I usually make a list because it helps improve my schedule, and from that, I can do all my work easily and manage my time well.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'used to make' and 'helped' which imply past habits, but the context suggests a current habitual action, so present tense 'usually make' and 'helps' are appropriate. Also, 'menu work' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'a lot of work' fits better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think some people don't like a making list because it consume their times. I'm talking about from me, but I like.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it consumes their time. I'm speaking about myself, but I like it.

The phrase 'a making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' without 'a'. 'Consume their times' should be 'consumes their time' because 'time' is uncountable and singular here. 'I'm talking about from me' is awkward; 'I'm speaking about myself' is clearer.

× Everyone knows today's world is a modern world, so I prefer writing a looks least on my phone rather than a paper because it's in a paper it's helped consumer more time, but in a phone we can easily. They can go everywhere.

✓ Everyone knows today's world is modern, so I prefer writing a shopping list on my phone rather than on paper because using paper takes more time, but with a phone, we can easily go anywhere.

The phrase 'a looks least' is incorrect; it should be 'a shopping list'. 'A paper' should be 'paper' or 'on paper' as paper is uncountable here. 'It's helped consumer more time' is incorrect; it should be 'using paper takes more time'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.