List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the food items I need to buy.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc làm danh sách trong công việc để câu trả lời cụ thể và thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and improve my efficiency, which in turn enhances my skills.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, đồng thời giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it repetitive and time-consuming. They may feel it limits their creativity and prefer to keep their plans flexible.

제안: Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao bạn thích làm danh sách trên điện thoại. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× Yes, I will make a list when I shop it same to outline in a some work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop; it is similar to outlining some work.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will' for a habitual action, which should be in the present simple tense. Also, 'it same to outline in a some work' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'it is similar to outlining some work' for clarity and correctness.

× And I feel when make a list when I shop, I can uh, I can buy food things I need.

✓ I feel that when I make a list while shopping, I can buy the food items I need.

The sentence lacks proper subject and verb agreement and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'that' and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I could make a list for my work because I think when I make a list for my work, my work is very my work is more effective and.

✓ Yes, I can make a list for my work because I think when I make a list for my work, my work is more effective.

'Could' implies past ability or conditional mood, but here 'can' is appropriate to express ability. Also, the sentence is repetitive and incomplete; it is corrected for clarity and completeness.

× I will improve my skill.

✓ I will improve my skills.

The noun 'skill' is usually plural when referring to abilities in general. Also, the sentence is correct in tense but benefits from plural form for naturalness.

× Some people at the Islamic English because they find the process receptive and time consuming, they may feel that this limit their creativity or spontaneity, preferring to keep the plants flexible rather than face.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find the process repetitive and time-consuming; they may feel that this limits their creativity or spontaneity, preferring to keep their plans flexible rather than fixed.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'at the Islamic English' is incorrect and unclear; 'receptive' should be 'repetitive'; 'limit' should be 'limits' to agree with singular subject; 'plants' should be 'plans'; 'face' should be 'fixed'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for meaning and grammar.

× Additionally, some individual individual my father is a warming, especially if they have many tasks.

✓ Additionally, some individuals may feel overwhelmed, especially if they have many tasks.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. 'Individual individual my father is a warming' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'some individuals may feel overwhelmed' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because because I feel this may are very effective.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I feel this may be very effective.

The phrase 'may are' is incorrect; the correct modal verb construction is 'may be'. Also, the repeated 'because' is reduced to one for clarity.