List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating phrases like "make a list" twice in the same sentence. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say "because it helps me avoid unnecessary buying and also saves a lot of time."

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me avoid unnecessary purchases and, as a result, saves a lot of time.

제안: Your answer is structured well but could be more concise and natural. Try to combine sentences using linking words like "so" or "therefore" to improve flow. Also, avoid repeating "I make" twice in the first two sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a schedule for my work, outlining tasks for the morning, afternoon, and evening, so it helps me save time and organize my day effectively.

제안: There are some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases here. For example, "making less" should be "making lists" and "making that" is unclear. Try to use linking words like "because" and "so" correctly and be more specific in your explanation.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and time-consuming. Additionally, they prefer a spontaneous approach, so making lists can feel like unnecessary pressure or stress to them.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains some repetition and minor grammar errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "you can" and use linking words such as "because" and "so" to connect ideas more smoothly.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient; I can easily add or erase items without scribbling, which saves time, and it's easier to carry my phone than paper.

× Some people usually dislike making less because they think it is very restrictive and time consuming.

✓ Some people usually dislike making lists because they think it is very restrictive and time consuming.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists' to match the context of making multiple lists. Using the singular 'less' is a mistake in number agreement.

× Sometime they prefer spontaneous approach, so making that makes them feel that it's unnecessary pressure or stress.

✓ Sometimes they prefer a spontaneous approach, so making lists makes them feel that it's unnecessary pressure or stress.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'spontaneous approach' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'making that' is unclear and should be 'making lists' to refer back to the topic. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage issues.

× Also you can add you can just erase it easily without scribbling so it's less time consuming and also it's easier to take the phone rather than the paper.

✓ Also, you can just erase it easily without scribbling, so it's less time consuming and also it's easier to take the phone rather than the paper.

The phrase 'you can add you can just erase it' is redundant and confusing. Removing the repeated 'you can add' clarifies the sentence. This correction addresses the incorrect and redundant use of pronouns and improves sentence clarity.