List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“all is I will make a list”应为“I always make a list”；句子较长且重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money. Also, it reduces my stress by keeping me organized.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，如“push more stress off my bed uh stained”不明所以。建议用更简洁明确的句子表达情绪对做清单的影响，并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

예시: I usually make lists for work when I feel positive because it helps me manage my time better. However, when I'm stressed, making lists can feel overwhelming.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，存在语法错误。建议使用简单句表达观点，避免复杂句式，明确说明原因，并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and adds unnecessary stress, which can reduce their efficiency.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，如“unequal oriented city”不明确，句子冗长且重复。建议简化表达，明确说明偏好及原因，使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check and update my tasks anytime, which helps me stay organized.

× I will buy many thing that I wouldn't expected and spend a lot of money.

✓ I will buy many things that I wouldn't expect and spend a lot of money.

这里的 'thing' 应该用复数形式 'things'，因为前面用了 'many'，表示多个物品。并且 'expected' 应该用原形 'expect'，因为是虚拟语气中的动词原形。

× I will make a list before I go to shopping because especially if I'm a shopaholic

✓ I will make a list before I go shopping because especially if I'm a shopaholic

短语 'go shopping' 不需要介词 'to'，正确用法是 'go shopping'。

× the advantage of making a lease helps me to manage my money, help me to saving more money and also for psychological is also.

✓ the advantage of making a list helps me to manage my money, helps me to save more money and is also good for my psychology.

原句中 'lease' 应为 'list'，且动词 'help' 应与主语 'advantage' 一致用第三人称单数 'helps'，'saving' 应改为动词原形 'save'，句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× if I'm making a list, it will make me feeling overwhelmed and also push more stress off my bed uh stained.

✓ if I'm making a list, it will make me feel overwhelmed and also push more stress off my bed and stain.

动词 'make' 后应接动词原形 'feel'，而非现在分词 'feeling'。另外，句子中 'off my bed uh stained' 语义不清，可能是表达错误，需根据上下文调整。

× if I'm making a list, it will make me feeling overwhelmed and also push more stress off my bed uh stained.

✓ if I'm making a list, it will make me feel overwhelmed and also push more stress off my back and stain.

这里 'off my bed' 应为 'off my back'，是习惯用语，表示减轻压力。

× And so I comprehend why they don't like making a list because it's kind of put a lot of stress to themselves as they more like to manage their time more freely

✓ And so I comprehend why they don't like making a list because it kind of puts a lot of stress on themselves as they prefer to manage their time more freely

动词 'put' 应用第三人称单数 'puts'，介词应为 'on' 而非 'to'，'more like' 应改为 'prefer' 更符合表达习惯。

× And so I comprehend why they don't like making a list because it's kind of put a lot of stress to themselves

✓ And so I comprehend why they don't like making a list because it kind of puts a lot of stress on themselves

介词搭配错误，应该用 'put stress on someone'，而不是 'put stress to someone'。

× at least like a voice that not push or boost their efficiency instead of slow down because it's put too much stress on them.

✓ at least like a voice that does not push or boost their efficiency but slows it down because it puts too much stress on them.

缺少助动词 'does'，动词 'push' 和 'boost' 需要第三人称单数形式，'slow down' 应改为 'slows it down'，保持主谓一致。

× Also living in that unequal oriented city, I prefer making on my phone as I have maybe lost my paper when I go outside 'cause I will bring my phone everywhere.

✓ Also living in that unequal-oriented city, I prefer making lists on my phone as I might lose my paper when I go outside because I bring my phone everywhere.

动词 'prefer making on my phone' 应为 'prefer making lists on my phone'，'have maybe lost' 应改为 'might lose'，'cause' 应写为 'because'，句子更通顺。

× So when I wanna check something, when I have done something for finish something, I always open my phone and check my notice I have done or not and also it's helped me a lot.

✓ So when I want to check something, when I have finished something, I always open my phone and check my notes to see if I have done it or not, and also it has helped me a lot.

'wanna' 应改为正式表达 'want to'，'have done something for finish something' 语法错误，应改为 'have finished something'，'notice' 应为 'notes'，句子结构需调整使其通顺。