List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장 연결을 더 명확하게 하고 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 좋겠습니다. 예를 들어, 어떤 앱을 사용하는지 구체적으로 말하거나, 리스트를 만들지 않았을 때의 경험을 간단히 언급하는 것이 도움이 됩니다.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone using apps like Memo or Notes. This helps me avoid forgetting important items and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. For instance, last week, I forgot my list once and ended up buying extra snacks I didn't need.

제안: 답변이 주제에 잘 맞지만, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'tickling off' 대신 'ticking off'를 사용하고, 문장 연결어를 활용해 답변을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: Definitely, I make a to-do list every morning before I start studying or working. It helps me organize my tasks and gives me a clear goal for the day. Ticking off each completed task is really satisfying, and it helps me stay on top of things. Without a list, I would feel all over the place.

제안: 답변에 오타와 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 'going with the flow'와 'stick to the list' 같은 표현을 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 또한, 이유를 좀 더 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it too restrictive or boring. They prefer going with the flow instead of planning everything. Also, if they don't stick to the list, they might feel like they have failed, and nobody wants to feel that way.

제안: 답변이 전반적으로 좋지만, 일부 표현이 어색합니다. 예를 들어, 'Paperless are nice' 대신 'Paper lists are nice'라고 하고, 문장 연결어를 사용해 답변을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: I prefer using my phone because it's always with me. I use apps like Node to organize everything. It's quick to edit since I can add tables, pictures, and even drawings for reference. Plus, I can set reminders easily. Although paper lists are nice, they are easy to lose.

× I think this helps me stay on top of things. Without them I'd feel all over the place.

✓ I think this helps me stay on top of things. Without it, I'd feel all over the place.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because it refers to plural, but the subject is singular 'this'. The correct pronoun is 'it'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× They might prefer going with the flu instead of planning everything.

✓ They might prefer going with the flow instead of planning everything.

The phrase 'going with the flu' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'going with the flow'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Also, if you don't streak to the list it can make a failure.

✓ Also, if you don't stick to the list, it can cause failure.

The verb 'streak' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'stick'. Also, 'make a failure' is incorrect; 'cause failure' or 'lead to failure' is correct. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verbs (ID 11).

× I think people don't wanna fail, fail or make a mistake.

✓ I think people don't want to fail or make a mistake.

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. Also, the repetition of 'fail' is redundant. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and informal language (ID 12).

× I make A to do list every morning before I start studying or working.

✓ I make a to-do list every morning before I start studying or working.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. This is a singular and plural issue and article error (ID 1 and 22).

× Paperless are nice, but they're easy to lose.

✓ Paper lists are nice, but they're easy to lose.

'Paperless' is an adjective meaning without paper, not a noun. The correct noun is 'paper lists'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and nouns (ID 12).