List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Instead of saying "make a list of my shop," say "make a shopping list." Also, avoid repeating "helps me" twice; try to combine ideas smoothly. Use linking words to connect your points.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and also keeps me within my budget.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your reasons. Also, be careful with verb forms and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and manage my time efficiently, so I don't waste time on less important things.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. The phrase "expound them from buying something new" is confusing. Try to express your idea more clearly, for example, by saying that some people feel lists restrict their freedom or spontaneity. Use simple and clear language.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom to buy things spontaneously.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and correct the article usage ("a paper" should be "paper" or "a piece of paper"). Use linking words like "because" and "also" properly to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer making a list on paper rather than on my phone because paper is easier to access in the grocery store, and I don't want to risk losing or damaging my phone while shopping.

× Yes, I do make a list of my shop.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of my shopping.

The word 'shop' is a noun meaning a place to buy things, but here the intended meaning is the activity of buying, which is 'shopping'. Using 'shopping' correctly conveys the meaning of making a list for the activity.

× It helps me to remember things so I don't forget anything important and also it makes me to work efficiently without wasting much time on something else.

✓ It helps me to remember things so I don't forget anything important and also it helps me work efficiently without wasting much time on something else.

The phrase 'makes me to work' is incorrect. The verb 'make' when followed by another verb uses the base form without 'to'. Therefore, 'makes me work' is correct. Also, 'helps me to work' or 'helps me work' are both acceptable, but 'makes me work' is the intended meaning here.

× It helps me to manage my time well because I it happen to to know the amount of.

✓ It helps me to manage my time well because I happen to know the amount of time I have.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words 'to to' and misplaced 'I it'. The corrected sentence completes the thought and removes redundancy, making it grammatically correct and clear.

× I believe some people do not like making this because it limits their ability to expound them from buying something new.

✓ I believe some people do not like making lists because it limits their ability to buy something new.

The pronoun 'this' is unclear and should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'expound them from buying' is incorrect; likely the intended phrase is 'prevent them from buying'. Simplifying to 'limits their ability to buy' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I do prefer to make a list on a paper than on my phone because it is a paper is easily accessible for me within the market for the grocery store compared to my phone, and also I don't like holding my phone when going through the store to avoid it being stolen or lost or misplaced.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because paper is easily accessible for me in the grocery store compared to my phone, and also I don't like holding my phone when going through the store to avoid it being stolen, lost, or misplaced.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'it is a paper is' is redundant and incorrect; 'paper is' suffices. 'Within the market for the grocery store' is awkward; 'in the grocery store' is clearer. The sentence is also improved by removing unnecessary words and correcting article usage.