List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复（如“If if”），且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember what I need to buy. Without it, I often forget some items.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“does a lot”用法不当，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and plan my day clearly.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they might lose them. Instead, they prefer to remember things mentally, which they think saves time.

제안: 回答中有口语填充词（如“umm”）和语法错误，句子不够简洁。建议去除多余词汇，使用更流畅的表达。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime. Paper lists can be easily lost.

× I usually make a list so that I can remember what I need when I go to shopping.

✓ I usually make a list so that I can remember what I need when I go shopping.

动词go后面不需要加介词to，直接加动词原形shopping。go to shopping是错误的表达，正确用法是go shopping。

× If if I don't do that, I always forget what to do and what should I buy at that time.

✓ If I don't do that, I always forget what to do and what I should buy at that time.

条件句中，陈述句语序应为主语+谓语，不能用疑问句语序。这里what should I buy应改为what I should buy。

× I usually make a list so that I can remember what I need when I go to shopping.

✓ I usually make a list so that I can remember what I need when I go shopping.

动词go后面不需要加介词to，直接加动词原形shopping。go to shopping是错误的表达，正确用法是go shopping。

× It does a lot. It does a lot of help in my work.

✓ It helps a lot in my work.

短语“does a lot of help”不地道，应该用动词help表示“帮助”，即It helps a lot。

× It can help me know what should I do next step and clear the daily plan.

✓ It can help me know what I should do next and clear the daily plan.

宾语从句中应使用陈述语序，what should I do应改为what I should do；next step前的next不需要加step，直接用next即可。

× I think maybe these people will miss their list and forget what they do next, so they prefer to remember things on their mind and this can save some time to do this.

✓ I think maybe these people will lose their list and forget what they need to do next, so they prefer to remember things in their mind and this can save some time.

miss their list用词不当，应为lose their list；forget what they do next应为forget what they need to do next；remember things on their mind应为remember things in their mind；最后的to do this多余。

× I prefer to make this on my phone because I always take my phone with me every day and anyway umm so I can check my list anytime.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because I always take my phone with me every day, so I can check my list anytime.

make this改为make it更自然；and anyway umm so结构重复，应删去and anyway umm。

× If I do this on the paper, I may be missing it and all can't find it.

✓ If I do this on paper, I may lose it and can't find it.

on the paper应为on paper；may be missing it表达不准确，应为may lose it；and all can't find it语法错误，应为and can't find it或直接can't find it。