List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using simpler sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need, such as food and clothes, so I can buy everything easily without forgetting anything.

제안: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why making lists helps you with your work or studies.

예시: Yes, I do make lists for my work as a student. For example, I am currently learning iOS development, which is quite challenging. Making lists helps me organise my tasks and stay focused because I know it is important for my future career.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to structure your answer logically.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. For instance, they might prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer sentence structures. Use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons.

예시: I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Nowadays, smartphones allow me to organise my schedule and shopping lists easily, so I always use my phone for this purpose.

× Well, actually, yes, I always make the list when I go to shopping.

✓ Well, actually, yes, I always make a list when I go shopping.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list' and 'shopping'. 'A list' is more appropriate as it refers to any list, not a specific one. Also, 'go shopping' is the correct phrase without 'to'.

× I write to a note, the net, like a book, the food or the clothes.

✓ I write a note, like on a notebook, about food or clothes.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'a note'. Also, 'the net' is unclear; likely 'notebook' is intended. 'Like a book' is vague; 'like on a notebook' clarifies the meaning. 'The food or the clothes' should be 'food or clothes' without 'the' as general categories.

× So I went to the shop. I can buy everything easy.

✓ So I go to the shop. I can buy everything easily.

The tense is inconsistent; 'went' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'go' is correct. 'Easy' is an adjective but should be the adverb 'easily' to modify 'buy'. Also, 'the shop' is acceptable if a specific shop is implied, but 'the' can be omitted if general.

× I always make the list when I go to shopping.

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list.

× You know, currently I'm a student, but I have a lot on my breath.

✓ You know, currently I'm a student, but I have a lot on my plate.

The phrase 'a lot on my breath' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'a lot on my plate', meaning having many responsibilities.

× in this time I managed to learning iOS, you know, it's very difficult for me, but I try my best to learning this because I recognize a key reason for my future.

✓ At this time, I have managed to learn iOS. You know, it's very difficult for me, but I try my best to learn it because I recognise it is a key reason for my future.

'Managed to learning' is incorrect; the correct form is 'managed to learn'. 'Try my best to learning' should be 'try my best to learn'. Also, 'in this time' is better expressed as 'at this time'. 'Recognize a key reason' is unclear; 'recognise it is a key reason' clarifies meaning.

× Well, to be honest, I have never thought it about this before, but to be honest, I think it's the main reason is really take edge.

✓ Well, to be honest, I have never thought about this before, but I think the main reason is really to take advantage.

'Thought it about this' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'thought about this'. 'Take edge' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take advantage'. Also, 'it's the main reason is' is redundant; 'I think the main reason is' is correct.

× You know when we do everything, we don't must to take a note at least.

✓ You know, when we do everything, we don't have to take a note at least.

'Don't must to' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'don't have to'. 'Must' does not combine with 'don't' and 'to' in this way.

× We are absolutely in my phone.

✓ I absolutely use my phone.

'We are absolutely in my phone' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I absolutely use my phone'.

× Do you know my schedule or my list or to shopping?

✓ Do you know my schedule or my shopping list?

'Or to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping list' to refer to a list for shopping. Also, the sentence is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I always take taking note in my phone is very convenient.

✓ I always take notes on my phone; it is very convenient.

'Take taking note' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take notes'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The sentence is better split for clarity.