List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如重复使用“can”，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法练习，避免重复词汇，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, making my shopping more efficient and organized.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，确保回答逻辑清楚。

예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work, but sometimes it doesn't help because unexpected tasks come up and I have to change my plans.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，逻辑连接不清晰。建议加强句子结构和连接词的使用，表达更连贯。

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because unexpected tasks often come up, forcing them to change their plans, so they prefer to stay flexible.

제안: 回答未完成且表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误。建议练习完整表达观点，使用准确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because nowadays, we always have our phones with us, which makes it convenient to check and update my lists anytime.

× I think make a list can can let me know clearly what should I buy and it's also made my shopping very easily to find my aim.

✓ I think making a list can let me know clearly what I should buy and it also makes my shopping much easier to find what I want.

动词后面需要用动名词形式，'make a list' 应改为 'making a list'。此外，'can can' 是重复，应去掉一个。'should I buy' 语序错误，陈述句中应为 'I should buy'。'made my shopping very easily' 应改为 'makes my shopping much easier'，形容词和副词用法错误。

× Definitely I would always make a list of my work, but to say the truth, it didn't work many of times because, you know, I wasn't I wasn't very allowed to my.

✓ Definitely I would always make a list of my work, but to tell the truth, it didn't work many times because, you know, I wasn't very allowed to do so.

'to say the truth' 应为固定表达 'to tell the truth'。'many of times' 应为 'many times'。句尾 'I wasn't I wasn't very allowed to my' 结构不完整，应改为 'I wasn't very allowed to do so'。

× Umm, maybe because it's always have unexpected tasks or some immediately works so that you have to change the plans? Flexible so it's doesn't use it so they might don't like to making lists.

✓ Umm, maybe because there are always unexpected tasks or some immediate work so that you have to change the plans. Being flexible, they don't use it, so they might not like making lists.

'it's always have' 主谓不一致，应改为 'there are always'。'immediately works' 应为 'immediate work'。'it's doesn't use it' 语法错误，应改为 'they don't use it'。'might don't like to making lists' 语法错误，应改为 'might not like making lists'。

× Yeah, I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because in the modern society, like today, we have our friend on my hands every time, every moment, so it can help me to.

✓ Yeah, I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because in modern society, like today, we have our friends in our hands every time, every moment, so it can help me.

'in the modern society' 中 'the' 不必要，应去掉。'our friend on my hands' 应为复数 'our friends in our hands'。句尾 'help me to' 不完整，应去掉 'to'。