List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“forgot”应为“forget”，“expanding”应为“spending”，建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用。同时，回答中有口语填充词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议简洁表达，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because I sometimes forget what I really need. Also, it helps me avoid spending money on unnecessary items.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“involve”应为“involves”，重复使用“and and”，以及口语化表达“you know”影响正式性。建议注意语法一致性，避免重复和口语填充词。

예시: It depends. If my work involves simple tasks, I usually skip making a list and complete them one by one. However, if there are multiple smaller tasks, I make a list to organize them, which helps me work more efficiently.

제안: 回答结构不够清晰，第二句不完整，缺少主语和谓语。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it. Instead, they prefer to be motivated by deadlines to manage their work effectively.

제안: 回答较为完整且逻辑清晰，但“distractor”用词稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达如“distraction”。此外，句子稍长，建议适当拆分以增强表达清晰度。

예시: It depends. If my work mainly involves using a computer, I prefer to make the list on paper because my phone can be a distraction. However, when I go shopping, I usually use my phone to make the list.

× The first reason is that I sometimes forgot what I really need.

✓ The first reason is that I sometimes forget what I really need.

这里的时间状语是“sometimes”，表示经常发生的动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时“forgot”。

× The second is that it can help me to avoid extra expense, uh, expanding that I'm not really in need.

✓ The second is that it can help me to avoid extra expenses, uh, spending on things that I'm not really in need of.

原句中“expanding”用法错误，应该用“spending”表示花费；另外“extra expense”应为复数“extra expenses”，且“in need”前应加介词“of”。

× If my work just involve simple things, I will skip the list and just do my tasks one by one.

✓ If my work just involves simple things, I will skip the list and just do my tasks one by one.

主语“my work”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“involves”，而不是复数“involve”。

× Just some people who are not familiar or used to making a list before work.

✓ Just some people who are not familiar with or used to making a list before work.

短语“familiar or used to”后应接介词“with”，表示熟悉某事。

× They are more motivated by the deadline.

✓ They are more motivated by deadlines.

“deadline”应使用复数形式“deadlines”，表示多个截止时间；此外，句子结构正确，无需更改介词。