List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法的に不自然な部分があります。"but I want to buy"は意味が不明瞭で、"so I don't forget what I want to buy"のように明確に表現しましょう。また、もう少し具体的な理由や例を加えると良いです。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping so that I don't forget the items I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe I wanted to try.

제안: 回答が途中で終わっているため、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を完結させ、リストがどのように役立つか具体的に説明しましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開することも重要です。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. Using the list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important duties.

제안: 質問に対して逆の内容を答えているため、意味が通じません。質問の意図に沿って、なぜリスト作りを嫌う人がいるのか具体的な理由を述べましょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel it limits their flexibility during the day.

제안: 理由は伝わりますが、"uh"などの間投詞は避け、より自然な表現にしましょう。また、理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いです。

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper because looking at a smartphone screen for a long time strains my eyes. Writing on paper feels more comfortable and helps me focus better.

× using a smartphone is tiring my eyes

✓ using a smartphone tires my eyes

The verb 'tiring' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the simple present 'tires' to indicate that using a smartphone causes eye fatigue. The verb 'tiring' is a present participle and cannot be used as the main verb in this sentence. Suggestion: Use the simple present tense verb 'tires' to express the effect on the eyes.