List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more natural. For example, instead of 'I write down it on paper,' say 'I write it down on paper.' Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. Therefore, I usually write it down on paper before I leave home.

제안: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer expression. Instead of 'I wanna flexible,' say 'I want to be flexible.' Also, explain briefly why flexibility prevents you from making a list, using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible. Since my tasks can change frequently, I find it easier to remember them in my mind rather than following a fixed list.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. For example, say 'Some people find making lists boring and time-consuming. They feel it is too strict and difficult to maintain because they prefer to be flexible with their time.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. Moreover, they feel that lists are too strict and hard to follow, especially if they prefer to be flexible with their schedules.

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs grammatical corrections and smoother linking. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me in my pocket. Therefore, I can easily update the list and share it with my friends.'

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always in my pocket throughout the day. This way, I can easily update the list whenever needed and share it quickly with my friends.

× I wanna flexible with my work so I can't make a list.

✓ I want to be flexible with my work so I can't make a list.

The phrase 'wanna flexible' is incorrect because 'wanna' (want to) should be followed by the base form of the verb, and 'flexible' is an adjective. The correct form is 'want to be flexible'.

× Whenever I go, I write down it on paper.

✓ Whenever I go, I write it down on paper.

The pronoun 'it' should come before the verb 'write down' as 'write down' is a phrasal verb. The correct word order is 'write it down'.

× Because they think it's so boring thing, it takes too much time and it's so strictly scheduled when they make a list.

✓ Because they think it's a boring thing, it takes too much time and it's so strictly scheduled when they make a list.

The phrase 'so boring thing' is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'thing'. The correct phrase is 'a boring thing'.

× They one of flexible with their time.

✓ They are one of the flexible ones with their time.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' and the phrase 'one of flexible' is incorrect. It should be 'one of the flexible ones' to correctly express the idea.

× I prefer make list on my phone because my phone is within my pocket with all the all the day.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is in my pocket all day.

The phrase 'within my pocket with all the all the day' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' for pockets, and 'all day' is the correct expression for the duration.

× So whenever I wanna change the list it's easy to change and I wanna send with my friends I easily can share with them.

✓ So whenever I want to change the list, it's easy to change and if I want to send it to my friends, I can easily share it with them.

The phrase 'wanna send with my friends' is incorrect. It should be 'want to send it to my friends'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'if' and proper placement of 'easily'.