List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói: "Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the market to avoid forgetting anything."

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the market to avoid forgetting anything. This helps me save time and ensures I buy everything I need.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích tại sao bạn làm danh sách và nó có hiệu quả như thế nào. Ví dụ: "Yes, I make lists for studying and cooking because they help me manage my time better."

예시: Yes, I make lists for studying and cooking because they help me manage my time better and keep me organized.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous or find it boring."

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and feel that lists limit their creativity.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích làm danh sách trên điện thoại. Ví dụ: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is flexible and convenient."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is flexible and convenient. I can easily add or remove items and access my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop the example, I go to the market and I make. Meet me.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop. For example, I go to the market and make a list.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors causing confusion. 'The example' should be 'For example' to introduce an example properly. Also, 'I make. Meet me.' is fragmented and unclear. Correcting to 'make a list' completes the thought clearly.

× Yes, I make a little for study and cooking. Because it's don't spend my time.

✓ Yes, I make a list for study and cooking because it doesn't waste my time.

'Make a little' is incorrect here; 'make a list' is appropriate. Also, 'it's don't spend my time' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it doesn't waste my time' to express the intended meaning.

× I think some people like walking for inspiration. And some people don't like making English maybe.

✓ I think some people like walking for inspiration, and some people maybe don't like making lists in English.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can cause sentence fragmentation. Also, 'making English' is unclear; likely intended 'making lists in English'. Combining the sentences with a comma and correcting the phrase improves clarity.

× I like make a list on my phone because flexible and and. Useful. I can see many.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it is flexible and useful. I can see many lists.

'I like make' should be 'I like to make' or 'I like making'. Also, 'because flexible and and. Useful.' is fragmented and missing subjects and verbs. Adding 'it is' and correcting the sentence structure improves clarity. 'I can see many' is incomplete; specifying 'lists' completes the thought.