List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially when I need to buy a lot of different items. So I will make a list on the on the on mobile app and I qualify. Quite convenient for me so that I won't forget anything important and I can keep track of my budgets as well.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I make A to do list every day and I find it super useful for me to stay organized and focus on my task. And you know, I really love the way I write down all the the tasks I need to finish and the feeling of check off the items from the list. It gave me the sense of accomplishment.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
To be honest I don't know about other people, but I guess some people may perceive making this as time consuming so they will feel confident in their ability to remember task in in their head with their writing them down and they would rather use their time to dive straight into the task rather than writing the To Do List.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I find it more convenient since I always bring my phone with me so I can easily edit the list or rearrange the items on the list. And the app is really help me to stay all the night and focus on my work. And I will say that I can easily share my list.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi lặp từ và câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially if I need to buy many different items. I usually use a mobile app to create the list because it is very convenient. This way, I don't forget anything important and can also keep track of my budget.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 80.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có nội dung cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: Yes, I make a to-do list every day, and I find it very useful for staying organized and focusing on my tasks. I enjoy writing down all the tasks I need to complete and checking them off, which gives me a great sense of accomplishment.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu phức tạp và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên chia câu dài thành các câu ngắn hơn và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: To be honest, I am not sure about others, but I think some people find making lists time-consuming. They trust their memory and prefer to start working immediately instead of spending time writing a to-do list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa mạch lạc, ví dụ như "the app is really help me to stay all the night" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.
예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I always carry my phone, so I can easily edit or rearrange items. Also, the app helps me stay organized and focused, and I can share my list with others easily.
문법
× I qualify.
✓ I find it quite convenient.
The verb 'qualify' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is to express convenience, so 'find it quite convenient' is appropriate. 'Qualify' is not used in this context.
× the feeling of check off the items from the list.
✓ the feeling of checking off the items from the list.
After 'the feeling of', a gerund (-ing form) should be used. Therefore, 'checking off' is correct instead of 'check off'.
× some people may perceive making this as time consuming
✓ some people may perceive making this as time-consuming
The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective before a noun or in this case as a complement. Also, 'making this' is vague; 'making lists' would be clearer, but the correction focuses on the hyphenation.
× they will feel confident in their ability to remember task in in their head with their writing them down
✓ they will feel confident in their ability to remember tasks in their head without writing them down
The sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'task' should be plural 'tasks'; 'in in' is a repetition error; 'with their writing them down' is incorrect, should be 'without writing them down' to convey the intended meaning.
× And the app is really help me to stay all the night and focus on my work.
✓ And the app really helps me to stay all night and focus on my work.
The verb 'help' needs to be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with 'app'. 'Stay all the night' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stay all night'. Also, 'is really help me' is incorrect verb structure.
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