List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it's very difficult to remember what you have to buy, especially if you have a long list of items. So making a list can prevent me from forgetting what I need to buy and it saves me an extra trip to the shop. For example, just last week my list.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I would make a list for my work, especially if I have a lot of tasks to do and I feel like making a list for work can save me a lot of time deciding what to do when I finish a certain task. So I have a clear schedule of what I need to do for the day if I have a list at hand and this ensures a smooth flow of my work day.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I believe some people don't like making lists because they might find making a list to be time consuming and it might take up some of their time that could be used to focus on their tasks.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and I take my phone with me wherever I go so I can write down tasks on my list without having to find pen and paper. This way I can stay focused and organize during the day and not forget what I have to do.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it ends abruptly and lacks a complete example. To improve, complete your example and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it's hard to remember everything I need, especially when the list is long. For instance, just last week, I saved time by following my list and avoided making an extra trip to the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but it could be more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use a wider range of vocabulary.
예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have many tasks. This helps me save time deciding what to do next and ensures a smooth workflow throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be expanded with more specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and vary your vocabulary to sound more natural.
예시: I think some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming, and they prefer to spend that time focusing directly on their tasks instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 85.0제안: Your answer is clear, relevant, and well-structured. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence and naturalness.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient; I always have it with me, so I can quickly jot down tasks without searching for pen and paper. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important duties throughout the day.
문법
× For example, just last week my list.
✓ For example, just last week, I made my list.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'I made' completes the sentence and clarifies the action. Always ensure sentences have a subject and a verb to form a complete thought.
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