List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
No, actually I don't often go to shop and when I go I just lay in my head and not write down because MMM, it's just not of my habits, although I know it's good. But yeah, I just don't do that so often.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Umm, in the past I didn't do that so often, but recently I have, uh, I have started this habit because I know it's really good. It's helped me to organize what I need to do first, uh, what is, uh, the most important? And for me, it's really worth it.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think maybe for example, me in the past, I don't like to making lists because I kind of lazy. I think people may have all the reasons maybe because they are so busy or they umm, don't think that it's so necessary for them.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I mean both are good, but I prefer it to be on paper because I could I can see that directly on my table and not need to turn my phone because if I uh, useful, I easy to be distracted by all the apps instead of the not one.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because it's not my habit. However, I know it can be helpful to stay organized, but I prefer to remember things in my head.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại và tiếng ừ ừ quá nhiều. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ lợi ích của việc lập danh sách công việc.
예시: I didn't make lists for work in the past, but recently I started because it helps me prioritize tasks effectively. For example, I can focus on the most important jobs first, which improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'don't like to making'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn với các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
예시: Some people don't like making lists because they might be too busy or feel it's unnecessary. For instance, I used to avoid lists because I was a bit lazy and preferred to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích dùng giấy hơn điện thoại.
예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them easily on my desk. Also, using my phone can be distracting due to notifications from other apps.
문법
× I think maybe for example, me in the past, I don't like to making lists because I kind of lazy.
✓ I think maybe for example, me in the past, I didn't like making lists because I was kind of lazy.
The phrase 'don't like to making' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by either the infinitive form 'to make' or the gerund form 'making', but not both. Also, the tense should be past ('didn't like') to match 'in the past'. Additionally, 'I was kind of lazy' is correct for past tense instead of 'I kind of lazy'. Suggestion: Use 'didn't like making' and 'I was kind of lazy' to correct the sentence.
× I think maybe for example, me in the past, I don't like to making lists because I kind of lazy.
✓ I think maybe for example, me in the past, I didn't like making lists because I was kind of lazy.
The sentence refers to a past time ('in the past'), so the verb tense should be past tense. 'Don't like' is present tense and should be changed to 'didn't like'. Also, 'I kind of lazy' lacks the verb 'was' to be grammatically correct in past tense. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs 'didn't like' and 'was' to match the time frame.
× No, actually I don't often go to shop and when I go I just lay in my head and not write down because MMM, it's just not of my habits, although I know it's good.
✓ No, actually I don't often go shopping and when I go I just keep it in my head and don't write it down because, MMM, it's just not my habit, although I know it's good.
The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity. 'Lay in my head' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep it in my head'. 'Not write down' should be 'don't write it down' to include the auxiliary verb. 'Not of my habits' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not my habit'. Suggestion: Use 'go shopping', 'keep it in my head', 'don't write it down', and 'not my habit' for correct preposition and phrase usage.
× I mean both are good, but I prefer it to be on paper because I could I can see that directly on my table and not need to turn my phone because if I uh, useful, I easy to be distracted by all the apps instead of the not one.
✓ I mean both are good, but I prefer it to be on paper because I can see it directly on my table and don't need to turn on my phone because if I do, I am easily distracted by all the apps instead of just one.
The pronoun 'that' should be 'it' to refer to the list. 'Not need to turn my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'don't need to turn on my phone'. The phrase 'if I uh, useful' is unclear and corrected to 'if I do'. 'I easy to be distracted' should be 'I am easily distracted'. 'Instead of the not one' is corrected to 'instead of just one'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.
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