List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'I'll choose and I'll go to for the shop.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping, especially for kitchen and washroom essentials. I usually categorize the items to shop more efficiently. This helps me save time and avoid forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and natural flow. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetitive phrases and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

예시: Yes, I create a simple checklist before starting my workday. It includes all the tasks I need to complete, so I can track my progress effectively. This method helps me stay organized and focused.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more naturally and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid vague statements like 'I hope they will do.'

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they are not used to following routines. However, I believe if they understand how checklists help in organizing tasks, they might start using them.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and wordy. Use concise sentences and linking words like 'because' and 'so' to improve flow. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'once I done those' to 'once I have done them.'

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them anytime and easily tick off completed tasks. This helps me keep track of my progress effectively.

× Yes, I do have a list before going to the shop, especially the things which I need to buy for the kitchen, the groceries and for the washrooms.

✓ Yes, I do have a list before going to the shop, especially for the things which I need to buy for the kitchen, the groceries, and the washrooms.

The phrase 'especially the things' is missing the preposition 'for' to correctly link 'especially' with the objects. Adding 'for' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I'll segregate things differently, then I'll choose and I'll go to for the shop.

✓ I'll segregate things differently, then I'll choose and I'll go to the shop.

The phrase 'go to for the shop' contains an unnecessary preposition 'for'. The correct phrase is 'go to the shop' as 'go to' already indicates movement towards a place.

× It has all the points which I need to take care on the day.

✓ It has all the points which I need to take care of on the day.

The verb phrase 'take care' requires the preposition 'of' to be grammatically correct. Omitting 'of' leads to incorrect usage.

× I need to check those if I complete them and I'll get back to that work.

✓ I need to check those to see if I have completed them, and then I'll get back to that work.

The original sentence lacks clarity and correct tense usage. Adding 'to see' clarifies the purpose of checking, and changing 'complete' to 'have completed' correctly uses present perfect tense to indicate completed actions relevant to the present.

× The people are not making the list because they are not habitual of making some rules and regulations on day-to-day routine.

✓ People do not make lists because they are not in the habit of making rules and regulations in their day-to-day routine.

'The people' is unnecessarily definite; 'people' is more natural here. 'Not habitual of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not in the habit of'. Also, 'making some rules and regulations on day-to-day routine' is awkward; 'in their day-to-day routine' is better.

× So I believe they must understand the uses of the checklist.

✓ So I believe they should understand the uses of the checklist.

'Must' implies obligation or necessity, which is too strong here. 'Should' is more appropriate to express recommendation or expectation.

× I hope they will do.

✓ I hope they will do so.

The phrase 'I hope they will do' is incomplete. Adding 'so' completes the expression, meaning 'I hope they will do that' or 'I hope they will make lists'.

× I do prefer making a list on paper because it gives me the list in front of me every time anytime I can see them and I track on those all the time.

✓ I do prefer making a list on paper because it gives me the list in front of me all the time; I can see it anytime and track those items constantly.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced adverbs ('every time anytime') and inconsistent pronouns ('them' referring to 'list'). Correcting adverb placement and pronoun agreement improves clarity.

× Then once I done those I can easily make it tick over there.

✓ Then once I have done those, I can easily tick them off there.

'I done' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I have done' is needed to indicate completed actions relevant to the present. Also, 'make it tick' is awkward; 'tick them off' is the correct phrase.