List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'frugal lifestyle' and 'fundamental I want to buy'.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I like to be frugal. For example, I only buy essential items that are important for my daily life, which helps me save money and avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Begin with a direct response, then explain with clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'prefer myself from disturbing'.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and avoid distractions. As a result, I can organise my tasks better and complete important work efficiently.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Make sure to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases like 'make English' and 'doing past what they want'.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously without feeling pressured. They believe they can manage their tasks effectively without writing them down.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Start with a clear preference, then explain why using linking words and specific details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me. This gives me flexibility to check and update my list anytime during the day.

× Actually yes, because I'm frugal lifestyle so I need to list what the fundamental I want to buy.

✓ Actually yes, because I have a frugal lifestyle so I need to list the fundamentals I want to buy.

The phrase 'I'm frugal lifestyle' is incorrect because 'frugal' is an adjective and 'lifestyle' is a noun; you cannot say 'I am frugal lifestyle'. Instead, you should say 'I have a frugal lifestyle'. Also, 'the fundamental' should be plural 'the fundamentals' to refer to multiple essential items.

× Actually yes, because I'm frugal lifestyle so I need to list what the fundamental I want to buy.

✓ Actually yes, because I have a frugal lifestyle so I need to list the fundamentals I want to buy.

The word 'fundamental' should be plural 'fundamentals' because it refers to multiple essential items the speaker wants to buy.

× Like I just need buy something crucial and significant for our life, for my life especially.

✓ Like I just need to buy something crucial and significant for our life, especially for my life.

The phrase 'something crucial and significant' is correct as 'something' is singular. However, the sentence is missing 'to' after 'need' which is necessary for the infinitive verb form 'to buy'.

× Yes, I do because I prefer myself from disturbing which can distract my work.

✓ Yes, I do because I prefer to avoid disturbances which can distract me from my work.

The phrase 'I prefer myself from disturbing' is incorrect. 'Prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive form or a noun. Also, 'disturbing' is a verb form used incorrectly here. The correct expression is 'I prefer to avoid disturbances' or 'I prefer not to be disturbed'. Additionally, 'distract my work' should be 'distract me from my work'.

× Yes, I do because I prefer myself from disturbing which can distract my work.

✓ Yes, I do because I prefer to avoid disturbances which can distract me from my work.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used after 'prefer myself'. The correct preposition is 'to avoid disturbances' and 'distract me from my work'.

× And then I went to my work, stay organized and I do something significant for my work.

✓ And then I go to my work, stay organized and do something significant for my work.

The verb 'went' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'go' is appropriate. Also, 'stay' and 'do' should be parallel in tense with 'go'.

× OK, I consider to think why some people doesn't like to make English because they want to doing past what they want without any pressure and they believe can organize their tasks without less.

✓ OK, I consider why some people don't like to make lists because they want to do what they want without any pressure and they believe they can organize their tasks with less effort.

The verb 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. 'Make English' is incorrect; likely intended 'make lists'. 'Want to doing past' is incorrect; should be 'want to do'. 'Believe can organize' needs the subject 'they' before 'can'. 'Without less' is incorrect; 'with less effort' is appropriate.

× OK, I consider to think why some people doesn't like to make English because they want to doing past what they want without any pressure and they believe can organize their tasks without less.

✓ OK, I consider why some people don't like to make lists because they want to do what they want without any pressure and they believe they can organize their tasks with less effort.

The sentence lacks the pronoun 'they' before 'can organize'. Also, 'make English' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'.

× OK, I consider to think why some people doesn't like to make English because they want to doing past what they want without any pressure and they believe can organize their tasks without less.

✓ OK, I consider why some people don't like to make lists because they want to do what they want without any pressure and they believe they can organize their tasks with less effort.

The phrase 'want to doing past' is incorrect; after 'want to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'want to do' is correct.

× I prefer to make list on my phone then write down on the paper because I always bring my phone anywhere anywhere so it's give me flexibility throughout the days.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than write them down on paper because I always bring my phone everywhere, so it gives me flexibility throughout the day.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'on my phone' but 'write down on the paper' should be 'write them down on paper'. 'Anywhere anywhere' is redundant; 'everywhere' is better. 'It's give' should be 'it gives'. 'Throughout the days' should be 'throughout the day'.

× I prefer to make list on my phone then write down on the paper because I always bring my phone anywhere anywhere so it's give me flexibility throughout the days.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than write them down on paper because I always bring my phone everywhere, so it gives me flexibility throughout the day.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple lists. Also, 'write down' should be followed by an object 'them' referring to the lists.