List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Use correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. Moreover, I use a digital app that sends me reminders, so I don't forget any items.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organised. For example, during exams, having a complete schedule allows me to focus better on my studies.

제안: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct phrases and explain your opinion clearly with linking words.

예시: Some people think making lists is a waste of time. However, I believe that lists help keep tasks organised, which makes us feel less stressed and more confident.

제안: Your answer is mostly clear but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your thoughts for better clarity.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use a digital app that sends me reminders. This way, I don't forget my tasks and can stay organised easily.

× Definitely, I make list when I shop, it helped me to remember things on that time and I use a digital app to make my messages and it sent me reminders when I going to forget my target.

✓ Definitely, I make lists when I shop; it helps me to remember things at that time, and I use a digital app to make my messages, and it sends me reminders when I am going to forget my target.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making lists. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense, and 'sent' should be 'sends' for subject-verb agreement in present tense. 'Going' should be preceded by 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'am going'. 'On that time' is incorrect; 'at that time' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Definitely, I make list when I shop, it helped me to remember things on that time and I use a digital app to make my messages and it sent me reminders when I going to forget my target.

✓ Definitely, I make lists when I shop; it helps me to remember things at that time, and I use a digital app to make my messages, and it sends me reminders so that I do not forget my target.

The phrase 'when I going to forget' is incorrect. It should be 'so that I do not forget' or 'when I am going to forget' to correctly express the intended meaning using modal or auxiliary verbs.

× Definitely, I make list when I shop, it helped me to remember things on that time and I use a digital app to make my messages and it sent me reminders when I going to forget my target.

✓ Definitely, I make lists when I shop; it helps me to remember things at that time, and I use a digital app to make my messages, and it sends me reminders when I am going to forget my target.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'that time'. The correct preposition is 'at' for specific points in time, so it should be 'at that time'.

× Yes, definitely. I'm relaxed off my work. I make glitches during my exams at a time I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my study.

✓ Yes, definitely. I relax after my work. I make glitches during my exams when I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my study.

'I'm relaxed off my work' is incorrect; it should be 'I relax after my work' to correctly express the action in present tense. 'At a time' should be 'when' to indicate the time condition properly.

× Yes, definitely. I'm relaxed off my work. I make glitches during my exams at a time I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my study.

✓ Yes, definitely. I relax after my work. I make glitches during my exams when I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my study.

The preposition 'off' is incorrectly used with 'relaxed'. The correct preposition is 'after' to indicate time following an event.

× Yes, definitely. I'm relaxed off my work. I make glitches during my exams at a time I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my study.

✓ Yes, definitely. I relax after my work. I make glitches during my exams when I need my complete schedule to concentrate on my studies.

'My study' should be 'my studies' to correctly refer to the academic work in plural form.

× Some people think that it is waste of time, but according to me, making waste is the best way to keep our tasks on track and this way we feel less at rest and more confident about our work.

✓ Some people think that it is a waste of time, but according to me, making lists is the best way to keep our tasks on track, and this way we feel less stressed and more confident about our work.

'Waste of time' requires the article 'a' before 'waste'. 'Making waste' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. 'Less at rest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'less stressed'.

× Some people think that it is waste of time, but according to me, making waste is the best way to keep our tasks on track and this way we feel less at rest and more confident about our work.

✓ Some people think that it is a waste of time, but according to me, making lists is the best way to keep our tasks on track, and this way we feel less stressed and more confident about our work.

The phrase 'waste of time' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'waste'.

× Some people think that it is waste of time, but according to me, making waste is the best way to keep our tasks on track and this way we feel less at rest and more confident about our work.

✓ Some people think that it is a waste of time, but according to me, making lists is the best way to keep our tasks on track, and this way we feel less stressed and more confident about our work.

'Making waste' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'making lists', which is plural and appropriate here.

× Well, I give more preference to make lists on my phone because I use a digital app to make lists of my tasks and it sent me reminders when I'm going to forget my task. So that's why it is the best way to remember my.

✓ Well, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use a digital app to make lists of my tasks, and it sends me reminders when I am going to forget my tasks. So that's why it is the best way to remember them.

'Give more preference to make' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make'. 'Sent' should be 'sends' to agree with present tense. 'My task' should be 'my tasks' for plural consistency. 'Remember my' is incomplete; it should be 'remember them' referring to the tasks.