List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、冗長な言葉を避けてください。例えば、なぜリストを作らないのかを具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something interesting.

제안: 文法の誤りと繰り返しが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明するようにしましょう。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. It helps me remember what I need to do each day.

제안: 回答がほとんど意味を成しておらず、文法的にも大きな誤りがあります。質問の意図を理解し、なぜ人々がリスト作りを嫌うのかを簡潔に説明してください。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel it takes too much time.

제안: 文が途切れ途切れで不自然です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結にまとめることを意識してください。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often lose paper lists, but my phone is always with me and easy to find.

× No, I don't 'cause I like to watch some some product just impressed.

✓ No, I don't because I like to watch some products that just impress me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'impressed' which is a past participle; the correct form is 'impress' as a present tense verb to describe the product's effect. Also, 'some some product' is redundant and should be 'some products'.

× I like to, I like to buy immediately.

✓ I like to buy immediately.

The repetition 'I like to, I like to' is unnecessary and should be simplified to 'I like to buy immediately.'

× I sometimes make a list for my work because I lots of tasks tasks I have to do it do that.

✓ I sometimes make a list for my work because I have lots of tasks to do.

The phrase 'I lots of tasks tasks I have to do it do that' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. It should be corrected to 'I have lots of tasks to do' to properly express plural and sentence structure.

× So every day it's it's forgettable for me.

✓ So every day it's forgettable for me.

The repetition 'it's it's' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'it's'.

× In my opinion making lace wrist making lists is me is have means to don't forget for my mind that's why.

✓ In my opinion, making lists is a way to help me not forget things, that's why.

The original sentence is confusing and contains many errors. 'Making lace wrist' is incorrect and should be 'making lists'. The phrase 'is me is have means to don't forget for my mind' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased to 'is a way to help me not forget things'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I sometimes. Left I sometimes left some paper and I cannot find find it out, but otherwise my phone I can.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes I leave paper behind and cannot find it, but with my phone I can.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect verb forms. 'Left I sometimes left some paper' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes I leave paper behind'. Also, 'find find it out' is repetitive and should be 'find it'. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammar.