List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I have to buy' and clarify phrases like 'roughly a list on my' which is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: It depends on how many items I need to buy. If I have a long shopping list, I usually make a note to keep track, but for just one or two things, I don't bother.

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by reducing filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to make your explanation more coherent and concise.

예시: Yes, I make lists for work because I have many subtasks. Without a list, I might forget some tasks, so having one helps me stay organised and ensures I complete everything.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words and clarify expressions like 'trapped in a list or in a frame'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to work at their own pace without feeling confined by a schedule.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and filler words. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to compare options effectively.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can access it anytime without carrying extra paper, unlike physical lists which can be easily lost or forgotten.

× If I have many things I have to buy, I will make a list, but roughly a list on my.

✓ If I have many things I have to buy, I will make a list, but roughly a list on me.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'my' which is a possessive adjective. The intended meaning seems to be 'on me' to indicate carrying the list. The phrase 'roughly a list on me' is still awkward; a better phrasing would be 'a rough list with me.' However, correcting only the preposition as per instructions.

× I think sometimes people may think making a list is kind of useless, like umm, they or they do not want to be trapped in a list or in a frame that they have to do.

✓ I think sometimes people may think making a list is kind of useless, like umm, they or they do not want to be trapped by a list or in a frame that they have to do.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'a list' when the intended meaning is being constrained or limited by the list. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate being trapped or restricted by something.

× I think making a list on my phone is more convenient because I can check it at any time I want, but if I am writing it physically on a paper then I have to take the paper or take the booklet to everywhere I have to to to everywhere I go.

✓ I think making a list on my phone is more convenient because I can check it at any time I want, but if I am writing it physically on paper then I have to take the paper or take the booklet everywhere I go.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'a paper'; the correct phrase is 'on paper' without an article. Also, 'to everywhere I have to to to everywhere I go' is redundant and incorrect; 'everywhere I go' suffices without 'to'.