List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有重复。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work because there are many details to remember, and forgetting one could cause serious mistakes.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用更简单准确的句子表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they are spontaneous and find it stressful or complicated to organize everything in advance.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好并给出理由。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to write and see everything at once, although using my phone is more convenient nowadays.

× Yes, yes, I will make a list when I go to the shop which can help me to remember the things that I should buy.

✓ Yes, yes, I will make a list when I go to the shop which can help me remember the things that I should buy.

动词不定式中不需要使用to，动词help后面直接接动词原形。这里的错误是多余使用了to。

× It can help me strengthen the memory whenever I whenever, whenever I see the list.

✓ It can help me strengthen my memory whenever I see the list.

句中重复使用了‘whenever’，且‘the memory’应为‘my memory’更自然。重复词语是错误，且冠词使用不当。

× because during working there are a lot of details you need to remember if you forgot one, if you forget one, that will make a big mistake.

✓ because during work there are a lot of details you need to remember. If you forget one, that will cause a big mistake.

时态不一致，前半句用一般现在时，后半句应保持一致。‘forgot’应改为‘forget’。另外，‘during working’应改为‘during work’。

× Maybe they they are such a spontaneous people because making this is really kind of a stressful things.

✓ Maybe they are such spontaneous people because making this is really kind of stressful thing.

people是复数，前面不需要加such a；stressful things应为stressful thing，单复数不匹配。

× If they making this maybe will make them feel so complex.

✓ If they make this, it may make them feel so complicated.

条件句中动词应为一般现在时‘make’，且‘complex’用作形容词时多指人复杂，表达情绪应用‘complicated’。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper because make a list on paper is quite few different on my.

✓ Actually I prefer to make a list on paper because making a list on paper is quite a bit different for me.

‘make a list’应改为动名词‘making a list’；‘few different’表达错误，应为‘a bit different’；‘on my’应为‘for me’。

× But nowadays we are using more and more and using to make this is more convenient.

✓ But nowadays we are using it more and more, and using it to make lists is more convenient.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语‘it’，且表达不清晰，需补充‘it’和‘to make lists’使句子完整。

× So maybe I will make more.

✓ So maybe I will make more lists.

句子缺少宾语‘lists’，使表达完整。