List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和冗余表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. For example, last weekend I went to the market and prepared a list of daily necessities I needed to buy.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用连词连接句子使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make a list before I start studying because it helps me organize my tasks and stay focused.

제안: 回答不完整且重复，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to have more freedom to do things spontaneously.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确比较两者的优缺点，并用连词连接句子。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient to carry than paper, especially when I go outside.

× last weekend I went to the shop market and I wanted to buy something in the daily life

✓ last weekend I went to the market and I wanted to buy something for daily life

这里“in the daily life”用法不正确，应该用“for daily life”表示“为了日常生活”。

× so I made a list for about what I need to buy or what I should do

✓ so I made a list about what I need to buy or what I should do

“made a list for about”是不正确的搭配，应去掉“for”，直接用“made a list about”表示“列了一个关于……的清单”。

× I often make a list before I start to start start to study

✓ I often make a list before I start to study

句中“start to start start to study”重复且多余，应简化为“start to study”。

× I think it is important for us to make a list for about what we need to do

✓ I think it is important for us to make a list about what we need to do

“make a list for about”搭配错误，应去掉“for”，用“make a list about”更合适。

× Maybe they think make a list is is wasting time

✓ Maybe they think making a list is wasting time

“think make a list”结构不正确，动词think后应接动名词短语“making a list”。

× Maybe they think don't make list can have more free time to do

✓ Maybe they think not making a list can give them more free time

句子结构混乱，否定形式和主语缺失，应改为“not making a list can give them more free time”。

× I think make a list of my phone is more convenient than make a list on paper

✓ I think making a list on my phone is more convenient than making a list on paper

“make a list of my phone”用法错误，应为“making a list on my phone”，表示“在手机上列清单”。

× before sizing the paper cannot to take by myself if I go outside

✓ because I cannot take paper with me when I go outside

原句结构混乱且用词错误，应改为“because I cannot take paper with me when I go outside”。

× but if I do it on my phone I can take take my phone by

✓ but if I do it on my phone I can take my phone with me

“take take my phone by”重复且用法错误，应改为“take my phone with me”。