List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide specific reasons using linking words. For example, explain why making a list helps you and how it benefits your shopping.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and prevent unnecessary purchases, which saves me time and money.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and grammatical mistakes.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. By doing this, I can manage my time better and ensure I don't forget any key responsibilities.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to clearly state the reason why some people dislike making lists, then support it with specific examples or explanations using linking words.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they may feel that lists limit their flexibility during work or daily activities.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your preference. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and allows me to prioritize tasks easily. Moreover, I can access my list anytime, which makes it very practical in my daily life.

× I think that making a list when shopping is really essential for life because you can remember of the stuff you need to you need to buy and you buy something popular.

✓ I think that making a list when shopping is really essential for life because you can remember the stuff you need to buy and avoid buying something popular.

The phrase 'remember of the stuff' is incorrect; 'remember' should not be followed by 'of'. Also, the sentence is unclear about 'you buy something popular'; it likely means to avoid buying popular items unintentionally. The correction removes 'of' and clarifies the meaning.

× I think that making a list from when I'm working is vital in my life because I can do the important things for it and the last important letter and I can't remember the highlights of my.

✓ I think that making a list when I'm working is vital in my life because I can do the important things, and I don't forget the important tasks or highlights.

The phrase 'making a list from when I'm working' is incorrect; 'from' should be removed. Also, 'the last important letter' is unclear and likely a misstatement. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.

× Because actually making making a list is not important for the aims and the simply don't like making a list when they swapping working and they just notice.

✓ Actually, making a list is not important for some people, and they simply don't like making a list when they are working; they just notice things as they go.

The original sentence has repeated words, incorrect conjunctions, and unclear phrases like 'swapping working'. The correction removes repetition, uses proper conjunctions, and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it's easy to take the things had to do 1st and it's easy to open the app. It's very prevalent in my life.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's easy to keep track of the things I have to do first, and it's easy to open the app. It's very common in my life.

The phrase 'take the things had to do 1st' is incorrect; it should be 'keep track of the things I have to do first'. Also, 'prevalent' is better replaced with 'common' for natural usage. The correction improves preposition use and clarity.