List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ не совсем естественный и немного запутанный. Постарайтесь отвечать более прямо и логично, избегая повторов и излишних объяснений. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. However, sometimes I forget items if I don't write them down.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова и более конкретные детали, чтобы сделать речь более связной и информативной.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my school tasks because we have many classes. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any assignments.

제안: Ответ неясный и содержит повторения. Постарайтесь формулировать мысли чётко и использовать более разнообразную лексику, а также избегать лишних слов.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и не очень плавный. Используйте связующие слова и старайтесь выражать мысли более кратко и ясно.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, so I can easily check my list when shopping or working.

× If I'm honest, I never make a list when I shop, when I'm in the shop because my brain is good, well working and my parents say it.

✓ If I'm honest, I never make a list when I shop or when I'm in the shop because my brain works well, and my parents say so.

The phrase 'my brain is good, well working' is incorrect; it should be 'my brain works well' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'and my parents say it' is unclear; 'say so' is more appropriate. The sentence also needs better conjunctions for clarity.

× And when I make a list I I don't remember I do.

✓ And when I make a list, I don't remember what I do.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'what' clarifies the object of 'remember'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typo and should be removed.

× Yes, of course. I always make a list for my school because we have a lot of classes in my school and when I don't make a list, I don't remember.

✓ Yes, of course. I always make a list for my school because we have a lot of classes, and when I don't make a list, I don't remember.

The phrase 'for my school' is acceptable, but repeating 'in my school' is redundant and can be omitted for clarity. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy.

× I don't think about this, but I think some people don't like making lists because they they don't like bring lists for shopping or for their work or their classes and etcetera.

✓ I haven't thought about this, but I think some people don't like making lists because they don't like bringing lists for shopping, work, or classes, etc.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'bringing' not the base form 'bring'. Also, 'and etcetera' is redundant; 'etc.' suffices. The sentence is improved by correcting verb form and punctuation.

× Actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and I bring this and when I go to the shop or my work I bring my phone and I prefer the to make a list my phone on my phone.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me, and when I go to the shop or work, I bring my phone. I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used; 'it' refers properly to 'my phone'. The phrase 'I prefer the to make a list my phone on my phone' is ungrammatical and is corrected for clarity and proper word order.