List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“make a list”多次出现，且句子结构稍显简单。可以增加连接词使回答更连贯，同时丰富细节。

예시: I usually make a list when shopping for groceries to avoid forgetting anything important. However, when buying clothes, I tend to shop spontaneously without a list because I prefer to choose items based on my mood.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“must to make sure”和“make a lead”，应注意正确表达。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并补充具体细节说明效果。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks efficiently. For example, by listing my daily goals, I can prioritize important tasks and complete my work more effectively.

제안: 回答中有语法和代词错误，如“he remember”应为“she remembers”。建议注意主谓一致和代词使用，同时丰富原因和举例的表达。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they are not used to it or doubt its usefulness. For instance, my mother never writes lists but she still remembers all her tasks perfectly.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，如“I perform make a list”和“write down in the paper is more”，表达不清晰。建议使用正确句式，明确表达偏好并说明原因。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember important tasks better than using my phone.

× When I buy some fresh items I will make a list to make sure I don't forget something.

✓ When I buy some fresh items, I will make a list to make sure I don't forget anything.

这里'something'用法不当，应该用'anything'来表示不确定的事物，符合语境。

× Yes. When we do some work, we must to make sure our work is efficiently.

✓ Yes. When we do some work, we must make sure our work is efficient.

'must'后面不加'to'，且'efficiently'是副词，句中应使用形容词'efficient'来修饰名词'work'。

× So make a lead is helpful to work better.

✓ So making a list is helpful to work better.

'make a lead'表达不正确，应为'making a list'，且动名词形式更合适。

× For example, my mother never makes lists but he remember, but still remembers everything he need to do.

✓ For example, my mother never makes lists but she remembers everything she needs to do.

代词使用错误，'he'应改为'she'，动词需与主语一致，'need'应为'needs'。

× I perform make a list on paper because I think just helps me to remember something important and write down in the paper is more.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think it just helps me remember something important, and writing it down on paper is better.

'perform'用错，应为'prefer'；'write down in the paper'应为'writing it down on paper'，介词使用错误。