List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I make a list of that. I creating a list when I go for purchasing some groceries, whether it's or clothes and or some household stuff. It's very useful for organizing things.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
It varies on the situation. It works sometimes, sometimes it didn't. But uh, I pre I prefer to make a list for purchasing. It's very important to organize something and neat and clean the.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Some people are responsible, they enjoy their freedom and they don't want to lose their freedom. They go freely and and shop anything that they want and look for discount which which they picked. So it's the very person to person.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
In my opinion, I prefer to creating a list on my notepad because it's relevant.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 55.0제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I create a list when I go shopping for groceries, clothes, or household items because it helps me stay organized.' This is more natural and effective.
예시: Yes, I create a list when I go shopping for groceries, clothes, or household items because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 50.0제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly and clearly. For example, say 'I sometimes make lists for work, but I prefer making lists for shopping because it helps me stay organized and keep things neat.' This improves coherence and correctness.
예시: I sometimes make lists for work depending on the situation, but I prefer making lists for shopping because it helps me stay organized and keep things neat.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 45.0제안: Your answer is confusing and has repetition. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they enjoy the freedom to shop spontaneously and look for discounts. It depends on personal preference.'
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they enjoy the freedom to shop spontaneously and look for discounts. It depends on personal preference.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 40.0제안: Your answer is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear preference with reasons. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more tangible and I can easily make quick notes.' This makes your answer more natural and effective.
예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more tangible and I can easily make quick notes while shopping.
문법
× I creating a list when I go for purchasing some groceries, whether it's or clothes and or some household stuff.
✓ I create a list when I go to purchase some groceries, whether it's clothes or some household stuff.
The verb 'creating' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'create' to match the present tense. Also, 'go for purchasing' is incorrect; it should be 'go to purchase'. The phrase 'whether it's or clothes and or some household stuff' is awkward and corrected to 'whether it's clothes or some household stuff' for clarity.
× It works sometimes, sometimes it didn't.
✓ It works sometimes, sometimes it doesn't.
The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the first part is in present tense 'works', the second part should also be in present tense 'doesn't' to maintain consistency.
× I prefer to creating a list on my notepad because it's relevant.
✓ I prefer to create a list on my notepad because it's relevant.
After 'prefer to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'creating' should be corrected to 'create'.
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