List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah jelas dan singkat, tetapi terasa terlalu singkat dan kurang detail. Cobalah untuk menambahkan alasan mengapa Anda tidak membuat daftar saat berbelanja agar jawaban lebih lengkap dan alami.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously and I usually remember what I need.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dengan memberikan alasan dan hasilnya. Namun, kalimatnya agak panjang dan bisa dibuat lebih ringkas dan terstruktur dengan penggunaan kata penghubung yang tepat.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete daily or weekly. It works well since it helps me remember all assignments and ensures I finish them on time.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengulangan kata. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on memory, or they find making and maintaining lists too troublesome.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada pengulangan kata dan kalimat yang kurang lancar. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan kata penghubung yang tepat.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to copy and transfer them to other devices, unlike paper lists which need to be rewritten.

× I make a list for my work because there are a lot of tasks that I need to do in a given day or maybe weeks.

✓ I make a list for my work because there are a lot of tasks that I need to do in a given day or maybe weeks.

The phrase 'in a given day or maybe weeks' is inconsistent in number. It should be 'in a given day or maybe a week' to maintain singular consistency or 'in given days or maybe weeks' for plural. However, since 'a given day' is singular, 'maybe weeks' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in a given day or maybe a week.'

× And I think it works because it helps me to remember the task that everyone assigns to me so I don't forget to finish.

✓ And I think it works because it helps me to remember the tasks that everyone assigns to me so I don't forget to finish.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because 'everyone assigns' implies multiple tasks. Using singular 'task' is incorrect here.

× I think it's it's individuals preference, but I think maybe they don't need to remember a lot of tasks so they need a list.

✓ I think it's an individual's preference, but I think maybe they don't need to remember a lot of tasks so they don't need a list.

The phrase 'it's it's individuals preference' is incorrect. It should be 'it's an individual's preference' to show possession and singular form. Also, the second part 'so they need a list' contradicts the meaning; it should be 'so they don't need a list.'

× Or they think maybe making a list is too cumbersome for them to maintain right and finish the place.

✓ Or they think maybe making a list is too cumbersome for them to maintain and complete.

The phrase 'maintain right and finish the place' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be 'maintain and complete' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× If I use paper it's it needs to be read again for its copy.

✓ If I use paper, it needs to be read again to make a copy.

The phrase 'it's it needs to be read again for its copy' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'it needs to be read again to make a copy.' Also, a comma is needed after 'paper' for clarity.