List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains a grammatical error ('made' should be 'make') and could be more concise. Try to use the present simple tense for habitual actions and avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list to help me quickly find the items I need, which saves me a lot of time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and contains some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure. For example, use 'because' and 'so' appropriately, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because, as a teacher, I have many important tasks to complete each day, so the list helps me stay organised and reminds me to finish everything on time.

제안: Good answer with clear reasons. To improve, you could add linking words and a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming, and also, they prefer to keep things flexible and spontaneous.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural. Avoid repeating 'it' and improve sentence flow by combining ideas with linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary.

예시: Personally, I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better and leaves a stronger impression.

× Yes, sometimes I made a list to help me quickly find the objects that I needed to buy, which can help me save a lot of time.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list to help me quickly find the objects that I need to buy, which can help me save a lot of time.

The sentence uses 'made' and 'needed' which are past tense, but the question is about a habitual action, so present tense 'make' and 'need' should be used to indicate regular practice.

× Yes, I really like to make a list in my daily work because as a teacher I usually have lots of important tasks need to finish in one day and then the list helps me to keep organizing, remind me to finish all the things on time.

✓ Yes, I really like to make a list in my daily work because, as a teacher, I usually have lots of important tasks that need to be finished in one day, and the list helps me to stay organised and reminds me to finish everything on time.

The original sentence lacks proper connectors and has missing relative pronouns and incorrect verb forms. Adding 'that' and 'to be finished' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'keep organizing' is incorrect; 'stay organised' fits better. 'Remind me' should be 'reminds me' to agree with 'the list'.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming or they just want to keep things flexible.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they just want to keep things flexible.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context to describe the activity.

× Personally, I prefer to make lists on paper because I think it can help me to remember the things.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make lists on paper because I think it can help me remember things.

The preposition 'to' after 'help me' is unnecessary and should be omitted. Also, 'the things' is too vague; 'things' without 'the' is more natural here.

× It will leave me a deep impression on it.

✓ It will leave a deep impression on me.

The phrase 'leave me a deep impression on it' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'leave a deep impression on me'. The impression is on the person, not on 'it'.